Wednesday, July 19, 2017

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[image from google dot com used in this haiga]


stealing sand
a little at a time -
outgoing waves



opened oven -
wafts of raspberry
slowly escapes
© gillena cox 2017

Blog hopping today with


Carpe Diem
#1222 Beach

Carpe Diem
#1223 Raspberry

19 comments:

Janice Adcock said...

And now my mind can almost smell the cobbler! Well done, Gillena.

Dove Dungeon said...

Very nice.

gillena cox said...

Thank you Janice

Much love...

gillena cox said...

Happy you dropped in Dove

Much love...

Kim Russell said...

I enjoyed those waves stealing sand, Gillena, but the raspberry wafts made my mouth water!

lynn__ said...

You're making me hungry with this aromatic haiku!

Gillena Cox said...

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happy you dropped in Kim

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

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Happy you dropped by Lynn

much love...

Magyar said...

__ Always, Gillena, grand; and time moves on! Thanks G, and from your sands came this Cinquain thought. _m


The seas
ground stone to sand
with years of hammer tides,
and moved its toil from here to there,
to here.

gillena cox said...

Thanks for dropping by and sharing Doug

Much love...

Milan Rajkumar said...

Beautiful with vivid imagery !

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Milan

much love...

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Nice haiga

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Kristjaan

much love...

Bill said...

I like "stealing sand." About time someone blew the whistle on the ocean.

In the other one, you want "escape" to agree with the plural "wafts."

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bill, much appreciated

much love...

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