TEMPLE IN THE SEA
Siewdass Sadhu
a dreamer and a dream fullfilled
temple in the sea
obeying the rule
we leave shoes at the doorstep -
we gawk at murtis
the sound of jhandis
waving in cool sea breeze and
we walking away
© gillena cox 2020
NOTE
In March 2012 i was fortunate enough to visit The temple with my Book Club
Poets and Story Tellers United
Weekly Scribblings #40: Walking Away
REVISIT
7 October 2018
7 October 2012
7 October 2011
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24 comments:
You are so cleaver and come up with the very best art. Enjoy your day.
Thank you for dropping by Nicole
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Just lovely, in the writing. And what an intriguing subject.
I love that sound, the snapping sound of flags in the wind! Very nice imagery.
It sounds peaceful ... and happy! Good for yoU!
I was totally drawn in & mesmerized by the haiku/artwork, then completely blown away by the verse which -- THANKYOU VERY MUCH -- concluded with the same, sooo...I bow deeply before thee. More please, GC. ASAP
That sounds like a lovely outing!
Thank you for your appreciation Rosemary
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Thank you for your appreciation Ron
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Is Murtis the elephant headed god? It seems to ring a bell. It is always good to visit somewhere unique.
all the statues are called murtis☺ the elephant head one is Ganesh
Happy you dropped by Robin
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I love the way you condensed your trip to the temple in the sea, Gillena, and I felt that cool breeze.
Happy you dropped by Kim
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Your words have a lovely dreamlike quality ... I was drawn in and mesmerized.
Love this walking away poem
Thank you for your appreciation Helen
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Thank you for your appreciation Susie
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You transported me there. Lovely.
Thank you for your appreciation Rall
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I could imagine being there, the mark of a successful poem.
Thank you for your appreciation Sara
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