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image courtesy Carpe Diem
slowly a snail seeks
his path between Cherry blossoms
reaches for the sky
© Chèvrefeuille



cool of morning -
cuttings of lemon grass
scents garden shears
© gillena cox

Revisit
faint cooo
lemon grass
pedestrian feet



written for the prompt at
Carpe Diem "Haiku Writing Techniques" #8 Karumi (Lightness)

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image courtesy Chèvrefeuille

what are they saying?
a chattering of bird sounds
to the evening wind
---- gillena cox


Revisit
lightness
setting sun
gifted


I am blog hopping today at
Carpe-Diem Ghost Writer #31, "One of a Kind"

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Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

pedestrian feet -
on the grey sidewalk wings
of a squashed bird
--gillena cox


Today's note - lightness/karumi


aesthetically haiku carries a quality of lightness, which makes it appealing to the reader, even if the theme is sometimes sad


I invite you to share some of your expertise on lightness/karumi with me

Today's tag