Monday, March 15, 2010

Smell Of

11 comments:

Magyar said...

__In 3 days... N.E. coast has seen nearly 2 inches of rain each day!
__These, just lovely Gillena!

And thank you... March 10th has come and gone, but I will pay more attention to CKK! _m.

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Dianne said...

Whoops, just commented from a different computer, and David was the wrong name!
Excellent poem, I can smell the promise, and I love the sound and feel of your words, "tease" and "drizzle"

Today was our first 70degree day in this part of California, and I could smell the soil...."what's that smell?" I could smell the sun!

Well done, Gillena
Dianne

Masago said...

I like this.

laryalee said...

I think this is quite spectacular, Gillena! I really enjoy your new style of haiga...they leave some work for the reader to do, and you connect the haiku very well.
:)
Lary

John McDonald said...

evocative Gillena
john

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks all for stopping by thans for the appreciation

much love
gillena

Lorraine said...

I don't care if it's a haiku, or tanga or what have you, it's absolutely stunning

comrade harps said...

shimmering beauty

BlueJayEye said...

i like how anticipation is building on every word, well done Gillena

Gillena Cox said...

BJ, comrade and Lorraine; thanks for stopping by

Lorraine its haiku + image = haiga

:)

much love
gillena