Monday, March 15, 2010

Smell Of


Magyar said...

__In 3 days... N.E. coast has seen nearly 2 inches of rain each day!
__These, just lovely Gillena!

And thank you... March 10th has come and gone, but I will pay more attention to CKK! _m.

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Dianne said...

Whoops, just commented from a different computer, and David was the wrong name!
Excellent poem, I can smell the promise, and I love the sound and feel of your words, "tease" and "drizzle"

Today was our first 70degree day in this part of California, and I could smell the soil...."what's that smell?" I could smell the sun!

Well done, Gillena

Masago said...

I like this.

laryalee said...

I think this is quite spectacular, Gillena! I really enjoy your new style of haiga...they leave some work for the reader to do, and you connect the haiku very well.

John McDonald said...

evocative Gillena

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks all for stopping by thans for the appreciation

much love

Lorraine said...

I don't care if it's a haiku, or tanga or what have you, it's absolutely stunning

comrade harps said...

shimmering beauty

BlueJayEye said...

i like how anticipation is building on every word, well done Gillena

Gillena Cox said...

BJ, comrade and Lorraine; thanks for stopping by

Lorraine its haiku + image = haiga


much love