Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Morning Impressions



per syllable count the verse in the image is not a haiku as its exceeds seventeen beats

here's another presentation which can be accepted as a tanka



this early morning
rain
it laves even
the silent intervals
of a bird's song
--gilena cox

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10 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

This laves, Gillena -- beautiful :)

wishes,
devika

6:22 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

This is beautiful Gillena I love both sketch and words equally...wow
(but I have to admit, I hate the word 'lave' I just hate it in English, it's a French word...

7:52 AM  
Blogger joo said...

Beautiful!
Hugs:)

5:55 PM  
Blogger Frieda said...

This is very calming.
I like the drawing and the words, too...
and I just learned that "lave" is an english word (fascinating!)

6:08 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Frieda calming is a correct
connotation and precisely why i chose to use 'lave'
Devika, Lorraine, Joo glad you stopped by

Lorraine there are words i too do not like but lave is not one of them; HUGS

much love
gillena

9:03 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely!

3:16 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I'm catching up on neglected sites.
Beautiful poem/tanka and image.

Adelaide

11:32 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Juliet, Adelaide thanks for stopping by

much love
gillena

7:22 AM  
Blogger HaikuKelly said...

I often play with the line breaks and word placements in my haiku before I finally decide which one to publish, but sometimes those alternatives that I never used still stick in my mind. Nice to know I'm not the only one.

1:53 PM  
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