Wednesday, April 03, 2013

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Linking to Sunday Whirl Wordle #102

Early Retrospect

peak of dawn
twitterings
the staff of morning
heralds

early whistlers...
ixora berry
locks in a beak

the silence
of interludes...
a song grounded

awakening pit...
cloud puffs powders the face
of new day

a large moon...
the Easter vigil ended
petals in bouquets

exalt in alleluias...
for again the stone
is rolled away

as it is written...
love redeemmed a world
that was lost

and so
this calls
for celebration
lenten fast
past


--gillena cox

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12 Comments:

Blogger Adelaide said...

A beautiful sequence, Gillena.

Would you explain the Wordles? What are the general guidelines and anything else a reader should look for? I see that the words come from the sequence.

Adelaide

9:58 AM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Thank God for the ending of the Lenten fast! I appreciate your retelling of the old, old story.

Awhirl with Richard Wright

10:01 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Adelaide
if you click the hyperlink, it will take you to the 'Sunday Whirl' where these word scramble images called wordles are posted, the idea is to write a poem using the words given as a prompt; then you can use the linky tab at 'Sunday Whirl' to enter your poem post there, as well as red other rsponses to the prompt; its quite interesting

much love...

1:53 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

MMT

thank you for dropping in; i enjoyed reading your response to #102

much love...

1:54 PM  
Blogger polona said...

well done, Gillena, this has a lovely feel...

3:07 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

How lovely the words spill in your work...

4:27 PM  
Blogger Dave King said...

Lovely. It all works very well. I think my favourite is

exalt in alleluias...
for again the stone
is rolled away

9:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

lenten fast
the days pass
slowly

10:19 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Polona thank you for dropping in

much love...

10:28 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Tumblewords thank you; welcome to Lunch Break

much love...

10:30 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Dave, thank you; welcome to Lunch Brea

much love...

10:31 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Bill; glad you stopped by


much love...

10:31 AM  

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