image courtesy CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI
twittering birds sing
of morning light, they banish
into yesterdays
the first crowing of roosters
those of a previous dawn
© gillena cox
Revisit
depths
shining through
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Carpe Diem #650, First Rooster Crowing (hatsutori)
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Poetry Pantry 235
38 comments:
A little bit of mystery in your tanka, Gillena! Happy Sunday!
Thanks Diane
i woke to bird songs, long after dawn, this morning
happy you dropped in
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Beautiful singing rooster. In my village there are no roosters! Already a childhood memory!
Happpy you stopped by Leovi
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heh. when we lived in florida a rooster escaped a farm nearby and took up residence in my banana trees...i have to say i was none too please with his wake up each day...i would take soothing birdsong over that any day...
Thanks for your appreciation Brian, happy you dropped by
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This is very clever, Gillena. I do like the sound of twittering birds. Smiles!
Thanks for your appreciation Mary
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The roosters of previous dawns.. I like the way this gives another image to me.
Thank you for your appreciation Bjorn
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Very precise, yet beautiful and evocative piece Gillena - I enjoy your talent - thank you very much... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
I love the roosters of a previous dawn!!
Love the crowing roosters
I much prefer the twittering of birds than the crowing of roosters, believe me! They crow far too early.
Thanks for dropping in Scott
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Thanks Sherry
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Thanks Donna
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Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella
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Lovely! (Words and image.)
Neat that the twittering birds banish the roosters, refuse left overs!
Two very distinct sounds and moods you've caught through the twitter and crow.
bit of a mystery in the tone ! tasteful
Thank you RoseMary
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Thanks for your appreciation George
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Thank you for your appreciation Suyash
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Thanks for your appreciation Susan
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What you write and your art is so beautiful it's rarely something I'm able to do, but If I did I wish I were half as good as you are, and you definitely would have been my best Haiku and other stuff I can't pronounce, If I had any involvement still I five you and Doug, the best haiku haiga, what have you, awards lol
i'm honoured, humble bow Lorraine, thanks for dropping in
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Roosters do tend to hog the pre-dawn space while others have to wait their turn.
Roosters show more resilience perhaps! Nicely Gillena!
Hank
Some morning noises - though loud remind us of how life prevails
So true Jae
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Happy you dropped in Hank
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Happy you dropped in Robin
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This tells me so much in so few words. A great tanka.
Nice tanka Gillena, I had the idea that you were talking about Peter, who denied Jesus. Really an unique feeling this tanka gave me.
Happy you dropped in G.L.
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Thank you for your appreciation Kristjaan
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