image courtesy Carpe Diem
on first reading -
the yellow of narcissus
stored in a poem
© gillena cox
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I wandered lonely
as a cloud That floats on high
o'er vales and hills,
# William Wordsworth #found haiku
[this is the first 2 lines rearranged, of the poem by # William Wordsworth 'Daffodils also known as 'I wandered lonely
as a cloud'] you can read the entire poem here
also posting this to the Facebook Group - Found Haiku
Carpe Diem #685,first flowers of Spring
22 comments:
The yellow of narcissus....what a thought. It all comes from somewhere doesn't it. Nice one.
happy you dropped in jazzy
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Special memories in the Wordsworth poem -- i like how you've added it as a "found haiku". :)
Perhaps that would be a fun exercise -- haiku all around us -- if we have the heart to look. And your narcissus haiku has heart ---
What a lovely haiku!! and I like how you "found" WW haiku...I've always been fond of his poetry and loved visiting his place on Lake District. Brilliant!!
Beauty again on this page.. bit of a long process making a commen though
Nicely done!
Ah, Wordsworth. Incidentally, Daffodils is being studied as one of Romantic poetry by my son in school.
You are so magnificent using words that are dreamy with photos that leave me breathless Oh Gillena, you give so much x
thank you for your appreciation Jen
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thanks Cheryl
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happy you dropped in Hamish
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thanks Dolores
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very nice Celestine
thanks for dropping in
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thanks for your appreciation Lorraine
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Love this one, Gillena
thanks Lolly
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I love the idea of found haiku.
Makes you feel you established contact with a wellknown poet.
happy you dropped in girl Friday
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You made it a gem teaming up with Wordsworth, Gillena! Like your style as always. Simplicity works!
Hank
I love that last line!
happy you dropped in Hank
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thanks Janice
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