one bird's chant -
anchoring the new day
coolness of dawn
coolness of dawn -
echoes in the empty street
where thoughts gather
where thoughts gather
rosary beads spin between light -
alas! the night was
© gillena cox
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birdsong 2010
birdsong 2009
Sunday Lime 1
Today is #42 in the series 'Sunday Lime',
Whether you had a party or peaceful night,
Redeyes Ft. Sweed - The Night is Over,
ends today's posting.
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Poetry Pantry 261
41 comments:
Wonderful thoughts in this piece. Have a great week!
thanks for dropping in Blogoratti
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I am sitting on the porch right now - and I was when the sun came up, and I heard the first bird song. So, I get this.
Have a great sunday gilena.
This feels like a chant...like a songbird...very uplifting
thanks for your appreciation X
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happy you dropped in Jae
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I love the idea of dawn in a birdsong. :) Beautiful.
Happy you dropped in Vinay
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Love listening to the chant of birds! Each songbird has its own.
thanks for dropping in Mary
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so very peaceful...
Oh very nice haiku series!
Bravo!
ZQ
I like the way they smoothly move from one to another.
happy you dropped in Sumana
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thank you thotpurge
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thanks Diane
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happy you dropped in RK
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The power of the night - where we can recharge our energy and spirit. Happy Sunday, Gillena
hey Gillena, what came to mind were two of my favorite female singers. thanks!
The birds give such a joyous feeling when they chant in the early hours of the morning.. something which I love waking up to :D Beautifully executed :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Lovely chain... so musical. ♥
I like the way one line from each haiku carries over to the next. Cool.
Thanks for dropping in Totomai
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Happy you dropped in James
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Thanks for dropping in Sanaa
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Happy you dropped in Magaly
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Thank you Sherry
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Oh trust me
I can tell
Enjoyed how the poem built on the last line of the preceding stanza....wonderful thoughts as the day begins!
Beautiful Haiku. Each is a little meditation.
Delightful! I love the open ending. And the haiga. :-)
Each dawn is a blessing, rain or shine, birdsong or the thrum of traffic.
Thanks for stopping by Donna
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Ah yes, a gift of divine hand. Happy you dropped by Robin
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Thank you Rosemary
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Thank you for your appreciation Myrna
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You ARE TRULY AMAZING always portraying your magick it's lovely, I will now post on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays half the cost, twice the fun Gosh I love your art, hope you know that!
happy you dropped by Lorraine; glad you are posting again; i will visit
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The last line was very moving.
Thanks for your appreciation GL
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