GAIA'S PATHOS [MAKING MYTHS 2]
Hearing his voice, she woke in yawning pleasure, for it was the time of union to transpose into birthing all that goodness could ever.
From loins and heart: skies and seas alive to a natural harmony.
The waters existed to calm, to soothe, to bathe, to absorb; oui.
Rain was never needed. Only existence held her
Clever passionate and full of love: the trees fruited, being, just like their mother
Ah but the pains of motherhood. Such offsprings seeking to mistrue, causing mayhem, strive and woe, morphed a path - The Undesigned.
Seeking waves of blood and gore so that now the saddened essence of Gaia, knows the passion of weeping songs to the cadence sad, assigned.
Sometimes, there be tsunami - passionate, like her wounded soul. Although, sometimes tears trickle, gentle like her heart, if truth be told.
Earth Day -
in a dawn serenade
the rain
GAIA'S PATHOS [MAKING MYTHS 2] © gillena cox 2016
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Making myths 1
Earth Day 2015
Earth Day 2014
HAPPY EARTH DAY 2016 EVERYONE
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linking to Sanaa's prompt Prompt Nights – Jour de la Terre – Earth Day [12]
27 comments:
Nice! :)
Oh Gillena this is beautifully written. Especially adore the haiku at the end :D thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
"...skies and seas alive to perfect harmony..." such a beautiful line in a poem tinged with such sadness XXX
"Sometimes, there be tsunami", indeed...
The tune of her cry dances her pain through your poem.
Beautiful depiction of sad truth. Touching!
This is beautiful and sad.
Thank you Diane
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Happy you dropped in Sanaa
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Thanks for your appreciation Gina
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Thanks for your appreciation Magaly
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Thank you Khaya
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Thanks for dropping by 'tea parties on Neptune'
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I agree that the language used appears to correspond with classical tales. I hadn't thought of ancients gods and goddesses being gentle, only naiads and nymphs perhaps who are more fun!
Thank you for your appreciation Robin
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"Ah but the pains of motherhood." , indeed.
I love the idea of rain as a serenade.
Thanks for your appreciation De
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Quite powerful, especially when read aloud.
Sadly beautiful. I love the closing haiku.
Mother Earth sadly does know the ache of loss - Only existence held her - what a profound statement..
A beautiful tale that could have sprung from the tales of Homer! Thank you for reminding me of my love of Greek mythology!
This is lovely and poignant, I especially like your haiku,,thank you,,
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