When i read the poem, i took from it the motifs of: writing, distance, places and appeal to the sense of taste and used them to go back in time and then come forward with today's haibun 'RENHAI RENDEZVOUS'
Process Note: Adhering to Classical Haibun which is always written in the present tense.
[that's us at the mall - a 2015 photo]
My poet friend from Canada, the one who has created the form rehnai, comes to Trinidad, its year 2015. He is here to attend the wedding of a relative. We agree to meet at West Mall to sit and write a renhai together, What fun! my first time meeting him in person. A little more of this rendezvous here
sweet vanilla chai -
feed me your renhai verses
spoken in low tones
RENHAI RENDEZVOUS © gillena cox 2017
Its hot and bright today perfect carnival time sunshine
Sundays are always special here at Lunch Break. Today is #21 in the series, The Sunday Standard, when a 5-7-5 haiku is featured. How is your Sunday going email me post a COMMENT or leave a link to your blog at the linky below
Poetry Pantry #338
Recuerda Mi Corazon
haiku my heart ~ rendezvous
29th Jan 2016
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