Tuesday, February 14, 2017

2051




St Valentines Day

love blooms here
in a special reserved place

etched in my mind
your heartbeat
those days we shared the same bed

© gillena cox 2017


Today's poem is a Cherita [pronounced CHAIR-rita] the Malay word for story or tale, read more about this form HERE



Blog hopping today with

reds in the garden

AND


Prompt Nights – Love’s a night-song sweet sung by the tender strokes of wind – Valentine’s Day Special

AND

Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
The Tuesday Platform

AND


Carpe Diem
#1154 Sumi-e, the Japanese way of painting, Imagination introduction

AND

Midweek Motif ~ Love






[hearts from google dot com]

Revisit
St Valentine's Day 2016
St Valentine's Day 2015
St Valentine's Day 2014

38 comments:

Jim said...

Those places do get etched in ones mind, Gillena. I kinda shiver when I think about things like that. Etched in my mind.
BTW, I missed you yesterday, you missed me. Happy Birthday!!!
I'm not posting today.
http://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2017/02/you-cant-always-get-what-you-want-226.html
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gillena cox said...

Thanks for the late birthday greeting, much appreciated. Happy you dropped by Jim

Much love...

Frank Hubeny said...

I liked the idea of having a reserved place in one's mind for someone.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Frank

much love...

Kim Russell said...

I'm with Frank on this one, Gillena. Love xxx

Marian said...

Awww.... love, love.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kim, happy you dropped by

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Marian

much love...

Anonymous said...

Agree wirh the others about the special place...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Thotpurge

much love...

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Lovely, Gillena!

Susan said...

True, abrupt dear etched image. I read it forward and back and so it strummed the tunes in my heart. Thank you.

Sumana Roy said...

the use of past tense adds a sad touch to the lines...

Kerry O'Connor said...

A precious memory of togetherness.

Anonymous said...

The longing in this verse is so sweet and painful to touch. It's a beautifully crafted image. :-)
-HA

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rosemary

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Susan

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Kerry

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Anmol

much love...

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Whistles!!!❤️💘 Oh I love this - such a wonderfully romantic write, Gillena! Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️💘


Lots of love,
Sanaa

rallentanda said...

A poem for an ex lover. A little sad that you are still burning a flame( flickering and feint though it may be. )Happy Valentines Day ( belated)Gillena !Nice poem.

brudberg said...

I think we all have those memories... really a good memory it seems..

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Sanaa

MUCH LOVE...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rall, ❤️💘a poem for my husband❤️💘


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Yup! happy you dropped in Bjorn

much love...

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Memories of love are the sweetest.

Gillena Cox said...

Yup! thanks for dropping in Sherry

much love...

Old Egg said...

The poignancy of the past tense is significant in this beautiful poem Gillena.

gillena cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Robin

Much love...

Janice Adcock said...

Beautiful, Gillena.

gillena cox said...

Happy you dropped by Janice

Much love...

kaykuala said...

Nice new form that is convenient to do. Thanks for sharing Gillena!

Hank

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Hank

MUCH LOVE...

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