at night while reading -
quietly an ant scurries
across words printed
✿
across the page it hurries
how much wisdom can
this ant acquire
© gillena cox 2017
I started last week with itchy eyes and by Tuesday I had to go to the doctor, by Thursday my eyes were clear and comfortable, but still a bit puffy, i'm still on prescribed meds.
No fun at all.
So how was your week, better than mine i hope?
Sunday Smiles
None is travelling
Here along this way but I,
This autumn evening.
© Matsuo Bashō 1644-1694
Blog hopping today at
Poetry Pantry
AND
Recuerda Mi Corazon - ant scurrying
AND
Carpe Diem
Time Travel #5
Enjoy The Music
Before you leave see also
Sunday Lime 45
Sunday Savvy 45
30 July 2016
36 comments:
I hope you feel better soon Gillena
I have a feeling ants acquire more wisdom than they ever let on! Smiles.
I'm glad you're on the mend! Your mind was still sharp enough to allow you to create!
sending you comfort, peace and well-being. not only are your ants wisdom filled-they are natural poets!
xo
love the second haiku/ verse...
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It is nice to picture that small creature on its travels. It likely lost its path and wondered what strange manner of landscape it was crossing. Smiles.
AHA! You've given the ant personality! Well done. (And I'm glad to hear your eyes are better now).
Oh, how I love the little ant scurrying across the words, bringing them to life!
I like how you give the ant personality! Glad to hear you're feeling better now :)
Glad your eyes are better.Enjoy your week.
Thank you for the lovely glimpse. I love seeing the speaker see the ant, and wonder...
Happy Sunday, Gillena.
I do hope you have some relief with your eyes.....I adore how you take the most simple thing and create a beautiful image in these few words....lovely!
Fun to think of the ant acquiring wisdom by scurrying across the words! For yourself, perhaps you should rest your eyes awhile? Mine need regular replacement tears in the form of drops or spray, because they get dry from watching screens so much of very day.
Loved the ant verses Gillena. I do hope that your eyes come good soon.
So sorry to hear you weren't feeling well. This reminded me of how strong ants are, I think I heard they can carry up to 50 times their weight. That is quite remarkable for such a small creature.
Glad you feel better Gillena. Ants and wisdom is a thing to ponder.
Glad to hear that you are on the mend. This post is so clever and truly gifted me with a smile. Thanks for this!
Sweet! Even an ant can evoke thoughts and emotions. Love this, and love the Basho write!
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Thanks Rosemary medicating
Feeling much more comfortable now
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