Sunday, January 19, 2020

2504


[a 3 by 4 inch sketch, ink and brush, done on a white drawing pad page]
kiskadee
on my neighbour's rooftop -
beak slicing the air

© gillena cox 2019


Here in T&T it's Carnival Time, Season of Bacchanal.

A happy Season of Carnival to T&T.

Sunday Smiles


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ENJOY THE MUSIC


Sundays are always special here at Lunch Break. Today is #55 of the series SUMI-E SUNDAYS. Tell me about your Sunday
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REVISIT
Sunday Standard 55
Sunday Lime 55
19 January 2018


BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

Recuerda Mi Corazon
a weekly unfurling of tiny jubilant love

AND


Poets and Storytellers United
Writers' Pantry: #3: Be Warm


AND


Carpe Diem
Weekend Meditation #112 Transformation ... sketching from life (Shiki's Shasei technique)
Shiki hated associations, contrasts, comparisons, wordplays, puns, and riddles - all the things we are cherishing here! He favored the quiet simplicity of just stating what he saw without anything else happening in the haiku. He found the greatest beauty in the common sight, simply reported exactly as it was seen, and ninety-nine percent of his haiku written in his style.

PROMPT:This weekend I love to challenge you to re-create a haiku (in Shasei style) by Shiki into a Tanka. Here is the haiku to work with:

kaboocha yori nasu muzukashiki shasei kana
Sketching from life —
eggplants are harder to do
than pumpkins
© Masaoka Shiki (Tr. Burton Watson)

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pumpkins and baigan
so colourful the market stalls
my one basket serves
to take all my purchases
carefully back to my house

© gillena cox 2020

In Trinidad and Tobago we do say eggplant, but we also call them BAIGAN


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CARNIVAL PAST photos © gillena cox



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[this Pink Periwinkle from my garden]





45 comments:

Magaly Guerrero said...

Sharp beak... and eye, too, in the case of the speaker.

Happy Sunday, Gillena.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by R

Much❤πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Magaly

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Lovely!!πŸ’

Happy Sunday, Gillena!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Hoping that slicing beak is filled with song!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Maggie
Ah he/she didnt sing just move head around and flew off

Much❤πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Sanaa

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

H. Hennenburg said...

Kiskadee and beak wielding immense power. Love to you and this little feathery stroke of colour on a Sunday morning.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation H

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

carol l mckenna said...

Oh ~ love your brush painting and haiku ~ very creative ~ ^_^

Happy Moments to You,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Carol

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Kim M. Russell said...

The kiskadee is a sharp little bird – loud too!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Kim

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

Lea said...

The imagery of your words were so vivid Gillena! Thank you! Happy Carnival to you, I love seeing the photos!

ZQ said...

Beautiful as usual :)

Jim said...

Liking it, Gillena. We have the mockingbirds on our rooftops, singing to each other from house to house.

Listen to the birds
Singing housetop to housetop
Mockingbirds we love
..

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by ZQ

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by and sharing a verse Jim

Much❤πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

indybev said...

The wonders of simplicity! Love the sketch and haiku.

Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost said...

I always love your beautiful Haigas.
There are some birds that flap around outside the kitchen window. The cat will park his butt on the stove so he can watch them. Not while I'm cooking, of course!
~cie~

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Lovely sharp image! (As well as beak.) In both words and picture. And now I have learned about a new bird – always fascinated by the ones we don't have here.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Bev

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Cie

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Rosemary

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Joel (@Stranded Tree) said...

A few words for a beautiful little bird. May it return to you again very soon.

Janice said...

Oh, the fun of fresh produce markets. You certainly captured the feeling. namaste

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Joel

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒ❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Janice

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Dr. Vandana Sharma said...

A chirpy day with the birds!

Old Egg said...

You always show the delightful a part of your world Gillena...thankyou for that.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Vandana

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Robin

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Adelaide said...

eggplant and pumpkin
pleasing in taste
vibrant in color
in my grocery cart
satisfying both

Adelaide


Margaret said...

adore the sketch and words

Wendy Bourke said...

Love the imagine of 'beak slicing the air'. It is so nuanced … especially placing it on a neighbour's rooftop ~ smiles ~

Jae Rose said...

So delicate and pretty

Gillena Cox said...

Very yummy tanka😊Adelaide

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Wendy

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Jae

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Margaret

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

Susie Clevenger said...

I adore the sketch and the haiku that it paired with it. Perfect!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Susie

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ•ΊπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love

rebecca said...

oh thank you! more bird song-more jublient reassurance!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Rebecca

Much❤πŸ’ƒπŸ½πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ½❤love