The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)
Divali eve -
bent bamboo patterns
bare
--gillena cox
Today's note - clutter
a haiku very often is morphed out a series of jottings, scribbles and write overs. In this process one of the uppermost issues for the writer is abstracting,
cutting out the unnecessary to get to the bare one breath reading experience
for example.....
eve of Divali -
only the bent bamboo shapes
no lights
eve of Divali -
only the bent bamboo
no deyas
eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
as yet bare
eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
yet bare
eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
still bare
eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
as yet bare
eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo sculptures
yet bare
and finally.......
Divali eve -
bent bamboo patterns
bare
I invite you to share some of your expertise on clutter with me
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