Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Opening



Early dawn's curtain,
Drawn to reveal rain showers,
And a pertinent absence of birdsong;
The hum of a motor engine;
The coolness of this morning,
Is quickly snatched away,
As the rain subsides;
Bird songs;
Kiskadee,kiskadee,kiskadee,
And sunlight floods the morning
Curtain call

opening windows-
a reservoir of raindrops
on leaves

--gillena cox

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14 Comments:

Blogger Gabi Greve said...

lovely !
Gabi

11:54 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

yes lovely
john

4:27 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Grand!
_m

6:33 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

I breathe easier when I visit you, thanks so much ;)

7:43 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

"reservoir of raindrops" is a wonderful phrase.

9:17 PM  
Blogger Frieda said...

Beautiful.
Frieda

6:23 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks to all of you for your appreciation

much love
gillena

9:29 AM  
Blogger Harshad Mehta said...

Picture so well created here! beautiful.

11:24 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

I like your second curtain call here, Gillena. The rainy season first curtain call set the scene very nicely though.
..

11:59 PM  
Blogger gabrielle said...

rain subsides, open all windows
a beautiful and vivid write!

1:25 AM  
Blogger anthonynorth said...

Beautiful and serene.

3:51 AM  
Blogger Kathie Brown said...

Yes, this is a lovely poem with the feeling of spring in words and imagery!

9:42 PM  
Blogger The Write Girl said...

You awaken all the senses with this poem. Stunning!

10:15 PM  
Blogger totomai said...

so fresh. that morning scent. can feel it.

9:22 AM  

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