Early dawn's curtain,
Drawn to reveal rain showers,
And a pertinent absence of birdsong;
The hum of a motor engine;
The coolness of this morning,
Is quickly snatched away,
As the rain subsides;
Bird songs;
Kiskadee,kiskadee,kiskadee,
And sunlight floods the morning
Curtain call
opening windows-
a reservoir of raindrops
on leaves
--gillena cox
14 comments:
lovely !
Gabi
yes lovely
john
Grand!
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I breathe easier when I visit you, thanks so much ;)
"reservoir of raindrops" is a wonderful phrase.
Beautiful.
Frieda
Thanks to all of you for your appreciation
much love
gillena
Picture so well created here! beautiful.
I like your second curtain call here, Gillena. The rainy season first curtain call set the scene very nicely though.
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rain subsides, open all windows
a beautiful and vivid write!
Beautiful and serene.
Yes, this is a lovely poem with the feeling of spring in words and imagery!
You awaken all the senses with this poem. Stunning!
so fresh. that morning scent. can feel it.
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