Sunday, September 01, 2013

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Linked today to Sunday Whirl Wordle #124; read the other Wordles here

An inky sky, to sway webs, light as feathers whirling close to stars, where sparks, splintered from oiled wheels of day and night, no doubt somersaults; a scarlet arrow shoots a hole through the abyss where wet surfaces of ocean murmurings dared to ripple; like moonlight over lost intergalactic asteriods

staccato treetops...
the spiral sounds of
helicopter flights

--gillena cox

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12 Comments:

Blogger Nanka said...

Interesting read and love the well oiled wheels of day and night, so apt, ...... and somersaulting sparks give great imagery!!

4:31 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

you always come through, quite a talent you have Gillena :)

7:29 AM  
Anonymous brenda w said...

Your piece makes me want to see the sky from your piece of the world. I love the phrasing of "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Brilliant!

9:12 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Nanka, thank you for your appreciation

much love...

9:19 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Lorraine; happy you dropped in

much love...

9:20 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Brenda, thanks for the appreciation; and thanks for keeping us wordling

much love...

9:22 AM  
Blogger oldegg said...

There are some lovely words associations here allowing the reader in imagine what you can see.

8:09 PM  
Anonymous WabiSabi said...

Your word pictures allow a reader to enter your dream! Thank you!

9:10 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

oldegg, thank you for you appreciation

much love...

6:05 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for you appreciation WabiSabi

much love...

6:06 AM  
Blogger daphnepurpus said...

Great imagery! And I too loved "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Wonderful!

9:11 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Daphne

much love...

10:08 AM  

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