Linked today to Sunday Whirl Wordle #124; read the other Wordles here
An inky sky, to sway webs, light as feathers whirling close to stars, where sparks, splintered from oiled wheels of day and night, no doubt somersaults; a scarlet arrow shoots a hole through the abyss where wet surfaces of ocean murmurings dared to ripple; like moonlight over lost intergalactic asteriods
staccato treetops...
the spiral sounds of
helicopter flights
--gillena cox
12 comments:
Interesting read and love the well oiled wheels of day and night, so apt, ...... and somersaulting sparks give great imagery!!
you always come through, quite a talent you have Gillena :)
Your piece makes me want to see the sky from your piece of the world. I love the phrasing of "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Brilliant!
Nanka, thank you for your appreciation
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Thank you Lorraine; happy you dropped in
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Brenda, thanks for the appreciation; and thanks for keeping us wordling
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There are some lovely words associations here allowing the reader in imagine what you can see.
Your word pictures allow a reader to enter your dream! Thank you!
oldegg, thank you for you appreciation
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Thank you for you appreciation WabiSabi
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Great imagery! And I too loved "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Wonderful!
Thank you for your appreciation Daphne
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