Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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AT BEYOND

Conjuring raindrops
she hides amongst the clouds
cap of golden curls

twine around
cumulus puffs like trinkets
a jeweler crafts

Sigh!
carry back the sunshine
to the upper room

Dont neglect
the eagles nest at beyond
you truant spirits

Bend the bow of colours and place it
-- gillena cox




Back Linking Today to Wordle # 144 at Sunday Whirl



AND Linking To
Poetry Jam 'Look To The Clouds'

42 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ha. took me a second...but this is cool...like a maestro of the storm....conducting the rain and even bending the rainbow to put in place for the finale...smiles.

Mary said...

I really like the 'cap of golden curls.' Enjoyed this!

Lorraine Renaud said...

you're so inspiring when you do that, one day when my laptop starts making any sense to me again, I may just try lol

Vandana Sharma said...

a cloudy day.......

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Brian (◕‿◕。)

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Mary

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Lorraine (◕‿◕。)

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Vandana

much love

Sumana Roy said...

Fabulous description all through..
so love the closing line...

Robyn Greenhouse said...

I clicked on the picture to enlarge it and found the rainbow hiding among the clouds!

aspiritofsimplicity said...

a very clever write and a nice read

Laurie Kolp said...

Enjoyed this... especially the golden curls and 2nd stanza.

Gattina said...

Very nicely written !

Gabriella said...

Very sweet poem! The opening line is very engaging.

Mascha said...

I like the picture and the poem

alan1704 said...

cap of golden curls - this is lovely and makes me feel of warmth and beauty. Nicely captured.

Magyar said...

So inventive Gillena; grand!
_m

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Robyn (◕‿◕。)

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Simplicity
Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕。)

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Mascha

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Alan

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Magyar

much love...

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I like the cap of golden curls, too!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Sherry

Much love ...

The Unknowngnome said...

There's something about this piece that just grabs me. I've read it four times already and each time I drift further beyond. Well done Gillena.

I really like: "carry back the sunshine to the upper room". :)

Gillena Cox said...

Gnome, Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕。)


Much love ...

Leovi said...

Yes, I really like this beautiful poem!

Peggy said...

I enjoyed this! Lovely cloud descriptions.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Leovi

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Peggy, happy you stopped by


much love...

Carraol said...

Love the sound of these words!

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Carraol


much love...

Susan Lindquist said...

I like the imagery here ... it's nice to think of a grand master of light that works magic with the clouds ...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Susan

much love...

brenda w said...

Beautiful!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Brenda

Much love ...

Nicholas V said...

Lovely words woven into a beautiful, colourful tapestry.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Nicholas

much love...

Peggy said...

Sorry to be so late in commenting. This is really a wonderful poem. Thank you for posting this lovely description of clouds!

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Peggy, appreciate the late visit

much love...