Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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AT BEYOND

Conjuring raindrops
she hides amongst the clouds
cap of golden curls

twine around
cumulus puffs like trinkets
a jeweler crafts

Sigh!
carry back the sunshine
to the upper room

Dont neglect
the eagles nest at beyond
you truant spirits

Bend the bow of colours and place it
-- gillena cox




Back Linking Today to Wordle # 144 at Sunday Whirl



AND Linking To
Poetry Jam 'Look To The Clouds'

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42 Comments:

Blogger Brian Miller said...

ha. took me a second...but this is cool...like a maestro of the storm....conducting the rain and even bending the rainbow to put in place for the finale...smiles.

9:02 AM  
Blogger Mary said...

I really like the 'cap of golden curls.' Enjoyed this!

9:05 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

you're so inspiring when you do that, one day when my laptop starts making any sense to me again, I may just try lol

9:33 AM  
Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

a cloudy day.......

9:48 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Brian (◕‿◕。)

much love...

9:53 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Mary

much love...

9:53 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Lorraine (◕‿◕。)

much love...

9:54 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Vandana

much love

9:55 AM  
Blogger Sumana Roy said...

Fabulous description all through..
so love the closing line...

10:20 AM  
Blogger Robyn Greenhouse said...

I clicked on the picture to enlarge it and found the rainbow hiding among the clouds!

10:24 AM  
Blogger aspiritofsimplicity said...

a very clever write and a nice read

10:45 AM  
Blogger Laurie Kolp said...

Enjoyed this... especially the golden curls and 2nd stanza.

10:46 AM  
Blogger Gattina said...

Very nicely written !

1:06 PM  
Blogger Gabriella said...

Very sweet poem! The opening line is very engaging.

1:23 PM  
Blogger Mascha said...

I like the picture and the poem

2:06 PM  
Blogger alan1704 said...

cap of golden curls - this is lovely and makes me feel of warmth and beauty. Nicely captured.

2:50 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

So inventive Gillena; grand!
_m

3:00 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

much love...

3:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Robyn (◕‿◕。)

much love...

3:29 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Simplicity
Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕。)

much love...

3:33 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

much love...

3:34 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Mascha

much love...

3:35 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Alan

much love...

3:35 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Magyar

much love...

3:36 PM  
Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

I like the cap of golden curls, too!

12:15 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Sherry

Much love ...

1:54 AM  
Blogger The Unknowngnome said...

There's something about this piece that just grabs me. I've read it four times already and each time I drift further beyond. Well done Gillena.

I really like: "carry back the sunshine to the upper room". :)

2:17 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Gnome, Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕。)


Much love ...

8:29 AM  
Blogger Leovi said...

Yes, I really like this beautiful poem!

10:46 AM  
Blogger Peggy said...

I enjoyed this! Lovely cloud descriptions.

4:30 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Leovi

much love...

4:57 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Peggy, happy you stopped by


much love...

4:58 PM  
Blogger Carraol said...

Love the sound of these words!

1:35 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Carraol


much love...

5:12 AM  
Blogger Susan Lindquist said...

I like the imagery here ... it's nice to think of a grand master of light that works magic with the clouds ...

10:22 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Susan

much love...

11:15 AM  
Anonymous brenda w said...

Beautiful!

11:42 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Brenda

Much love ...

12:06 PM  
Blogger Nicholas V said...

Lovely words woven into a beautiful, colourful tapestry.

7:34 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Nicholas

much love...

11:01 AM  
Blogger Peggy said...

Sorry to be so late in commenting. This is really a wonderful poem. Thank you for posting this lovely description of clouds!

12:59 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Peggy, appreciate the late visit

much love...

7:49 AM  

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