AT BEYOND
Conjuring raindrops
she hides amongst the clouds
cap of golden curls
twine around
cumulus puffs like trinkets
a jeweler crafts
Sigh!
carry back the sunshine
to the upper room
Dont neglect
the eagles nest at beyond
you truant spirits
Bend the bow of colours and place it
-- gillena cox
AND Linking To
Poetry Jam 'Look To The Clouds'
41 comments:
ha. took me a second...but this is cool...like a maestro of the storm....conducting the rain and even bending the rainbow to put in place for the finale...smiles.
I really like the 'cap of golden curls.' Enjoyed this!
you're so inspiring when you do that, one day when my laptop starts making any sense to me again, I may just try lol
a cloudy day.......
Thank you for your appreciation Brian (◕‿◕｡)
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Thanks for your appreciation Mary
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Happy you stopped by Lorraine (◕‿◕｡)
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Thanks for dropping in Vandana
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Fabulous description all through..
so love the closing line...
I clicked on the picture to enlarge it and found the rainbow hiding among the clouds!
a very clever write and a nice read
Enjoyed this... especially the golden curls and 2nd stanza.
Very nicely written !
Very sweet poem! The opening line is very engaging.
I like the picture and the poem
cap of golden curls - this is lovely and makes me feel of warmth and beauty. Nicely captured.
So inventive Gillena; grand!
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Thank you for your appreciation Sumana
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Glad you stopped by Robyn (◕‿◕｡)
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Simplicity
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Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella
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happy you stopped by Mascha
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Thank you for your appreciation Alan
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Thank you for your appreciation Magyar
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I like the cap of golden curls, too!
Happy you dropped in Sherry
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There's something about this piece that just grabs me. I've read it four times already and each time I drift further beyond. Well done Gillena.
I really like: "carry back the sunshine to the upper room". :)
Gnome, Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕｡)
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Yes, I really like this beautiful poem!
I enjoyed this! Lovely cloud descriptions.
Thank you for your appreciation Leovi
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Thanks Peggy, happy you stopped by
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Love the sound of these words!
happy you stopped by Carraol
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I like the imagery here ... it's nice to think of a grand master of light that works magic with the clouds ...
Thank you for your appreciation Susan
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Happy you dropped in Brenda
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Lovely words woven into a beautiful, colourful tapestry.
Thank you Nicholas
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Sorry to be so late in commenting. This is really a wonderful poem. Thank you for posting this lovely description of clouds!
happy you dropped in Peggy, appreciate the late visit
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