Tuesday, July 15, 2014

1471



TEARS

tears from a wellspring
on a wet day when bud-like
caricature blooms

~memories come bubbling~

gushing to surface
fresh wounds scarred to close lifetimes
shared in short limits
--gillena cox



Revisit
after
ms typhoon
of a wound



I am blog hopping today at
Ruby Tuesdays Too


And; 'the imaginary garden with real toads'- Sunday's Mini Challenge: Claribel Alegria. Using the line "memories come bubbling" from Rain
the imaginary garden with real toads

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28 Comments:

Blogger Gemma Wiseman said...

Such beauty in this lovely flower.

3:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Gemma

much love...

6:55 AM  
Blogger Gail said...

Great thoughts and a magnificent flower.

Thank for visiting.

10:00 AM  
Blogger annell said...

So much said in so few words...beautiful!

10:31 AM  
Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Beautiful..I have those moments when memories unexpectedly devastate. I have reread this several times trying to find a favorite line, but it would only mean copying the entire piece.

10:33 AM  
Blogger Helen said...

Lovely poem, lovely art. Smiles!

10:48 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Gail

much love...

10:55 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Annell

much love...

10:55 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Susie

much love...

10:56 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Helen

much love...

10:57 AM  
Blogger Karen S. said...

Thanks for your sweet comment! You have spoken in such few words, the absolute essence of rain, with such a soft, vivid voice.

11:51 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

Sensational, i feel it on my skin refreshing me, giving me strength thank you my dear Gillena

11:59 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Karen

much love,,,

12:27 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

much love...

12:28 PM  
Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

So many well-chosen words in your rainy day poem.

1:48 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kerry, happy you dropped in

Much love...

3:40 PM  
Blogger Grace said...

Very sad lines with: tears and fresh wounds scarred....

Thanks for linking up with Sunday's Challenge Gillena ~ Happy week ~

6:03 PM  
Blogger Margaret said...

tears and rain.. often the only way to heal, to grow.

9:39 PM  
Blogger Hannah said...

Your scars line is striking...the build up and deliverance of it's graceful.

9:52 PM  
Blogger Arushi Ahuja said...

Beautiful haikus Gillena...

3:37 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Grace

Much love...

4:24 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Margaret

Much love...

4:25 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Hannah

Much love...

4:26 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Arushi

Much love...

4:27 AM  
Blogger Gattina said...

Very nice !

6:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Gattina

much love...

12:18 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Beautifully done, haiku and photo.

Adelaide

12:52 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Adelaide

much love...

11:51 AM  

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