Saturday, July 26, 2014

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clipart from google dot com


eyelids which flutter
to sleep to dream of blossoms -
light curtains the dawn

--gillena cox



I am blog hopping today at Carpe Diem


the prompt is

shira ume ni akuru yo bakari to nari ni keri

the night almost past
through the white plum blossoms
a glimpse of dawn
--Yosa Buson

19 comments:

Adelaide said...

Love this one, Gillena.

I see the light
the crows tell me
that it's dawn

Adelaide

Anonymous said...

This is lovely Gillena!

BelindaBroughton said...

beautiful, Gillena

Arushi Ahuja said...

i had a long eyes wide open night!! all night flying! loved your haiku!! :)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing Adelaide

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Jen

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Arushi

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Belinda

Much love...

jazzytower said...

Love the haiku, loved the arts

Lorraine Renaud said...

Oh Gillena, this is so beautiful, charming, thank you

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Jazz

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Lorraine

Much love...

Bill said...

Borrowing from your good one

twilight
the infant's eyelids
flutter into sleep

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Dreaming of blossoms could be a pleasant way to spend one's bedtime!

A Glimpse Through a Cleft

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for sharing Bill

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Maggie

much love...

Kristjaan Panneman said...

A beautifully composed haiku in response on the haiku by Buson ... well written Gillena.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kristjaan

Much love...

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