Saturday, July 26, 2014

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clipart from google dot com


eyelids which flutter
to sleep to dream of blossoms -
light curtains the dawn

--gillena cox



I am blog hopping today at Carpe Diem


the prompt is

shira ume ni akuru yo bakari to nari ni keri

the night almost past
through the white plum blossoms
a glimpse of dawn
--Yosa Buson

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18 Comments:

Blogger Adelaide said...

Love this one, Gillena.

I see the light
the crows tell me
that it's dawn

Adelaide

9:48 PM  
OpenID blogitorloseit.com said...

This is lovely Gillena!

10:20 PM  
Blogger BelindaBroughton said...

beautiful, Gillena

1:06 AM  
Anonymous Arushi Ahuja said...

i had a long eyes wide open night!! all night flying! loved your haiku!! :)

1:26 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing Adelaide

Much love...

8:12 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Jen

Much love...

8:15 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Arushi

Much love...

8:16 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Belinda

Much love...

8:17 AM  
Anonymous jazzytower said...

Love the haiku, loved the arts

10:09 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

Oh Gillena, this is so beautiful, charming, thank you

10:21 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Jazz

Much love...

12:43 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Lorraine

Much love...

12:43 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Borrowing from your good one

twilight
the infant's eyelids
flutter into sleep

1:06 PM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Dreaming of blossoms could be a pleasant way to spend one's bedtime!

A Glimpse Through a Cleft

7:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for sharing Bill

much love...

4:17 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Maggie

much love...

4:18 PM  
Blogger Kristjaan Panneman said...

A beautifully composed haiku in response on the haiku by Buson ... well written Gillena.

11:30 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kristjaan

Much love...

12:09 AM  

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