Lunch Break: 1475

Saturday, July 26, 2014

1475

clipart from google dot com

eyelids which flutter
to sleep to dream of blossoms -
light curtains the dawn
--gillena cox

I am blog hopping today at Carpe Diem

the prompt is

shira ume ni akuru yo bakari to nari ni keri

the night almost past
through the white plum blossoms
a glimpse of dawn
--Yosa Buson

17 comments:

Adelaide said...: Love this one, Gillena.

I see the light
the crows tell me
that it's dawn

Adelaide; 9:48 PM
Anonymous said...: This is lovely Gillena!; 10:20 PM
BelindaBroughton said...: beautiful, Gillena; 1:06 AM
Arushi Ahuja said...: i had a long eyes wide open night!! all night flying! loved your haiku!! :); 1:26 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for sharing Adelaide

Much love...; 8:12 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Jen

Much love...; 8:15 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Arushi

Much love...; 8:16 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Belinda

Much love...; 8:17 AM
jazzytower said...: Love the haiku, loved the arts; 10:09 AM
Out of Sight L said...: Oh Gillena, this is so beautiful, charming, thank you; 10:21 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Jazz

Much love...; 12:43 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you stopped by Lorraine

Much love...; 12:43 PM
Bill said...: Borrowing from your good one

twilight
the infant's eyelids
flutter into sleep; 1:06 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: Dreaming of blossoms could be a pleasant way to spend one's bedtime!

A Glimpse Through a Cleft; 7:10 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for sharing Bill

much love...; 4:17 PM
Chèvrefeuille said...: A beautifully composed haiku in response on the haiku by Buson ... well written Gillena.; 11:30 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Kristjaan

Much love...; 12:09 AM