Wednesday, November 05, 2014

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coconut trees sway...
a pocketful of pebbles
to stir the waters
his wag tail dog frisks along
the shoreline shifting in waves

-- gillena cox




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i am blog hopping today at
Poetry Jam the prompt is "pebble"


31 comments:

Mary said...

Nice - can picture the shoreline shifting in waves.....

Anonymous said...

Beautiful scene to think of! Keep it up!

Peggy said...

What a peaceful feeling scene. I like that wag-tailed dog!

Brian Miller said...

great to have that friend along while you are skipping rocks...or just plunking them in the water to make ripples....

alan1704 said...

I can taste the sea breeze in this, beautifully conveyed.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Mary, happy you dropped in

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Umanga

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Peggy

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Gillena Cox said...

Indeed Brian, happy you stopped by

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Alan

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Pealogic said...

"his wag tail dog frisks along"

I just loved this line.

SaraV said...

Love the flow of this poem and a pocket full of pebbles to stir the waters... Wonderful! :-)

Sumana Roy said...

such lively scene..could feel the dancing of life here...

Lorraine Renaud said...

How beautiful this is, I love what you write and the designs you show, beautiful, Gillena

rallentanda said...

Nice tranquil beach scene.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Pealogic

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sara

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rallentanda

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Bill said...

moonlight on the water
the weight of a pebble

by the ocean
the weight of a pebble
on the moon

Gillena Cox said...

nice! thanks for sharing Bill

much love...

artbyrae said...

very nice

cifar shayar said...

reading and praising , beautiful lines

Pebbles

Gabriella said...

I enjoyed the beach walk you took us on.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Rae

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Cifar

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

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Donna Smith said...

Nothing happier than a "wag tail dog" at the beach! Thanks for the images today.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Donna

much love...

Nicholas V said...

A happy serene moment! Lovely, Gillena.