Wednesday, November 05, 2014

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coconut trees sway...
a pocketful of pebbles
to stir the waters
his wag tail dog frisks along
the shoreline shifting in waves

-- gillena cox




Revisit
lapping
toss
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i am blog hopping today at
Poetry Jam the prompt is "pebble"


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31 Comments:

Blogger Mary said...

Nice - can picture the shoreline shifting in waves.....

11:59 AM  
OpenID umangawasthi said...

Beautiful scene to think of! Keep it up!

1:58 PM  
Blogger Peggy said...

What a peaceful feeling scene. I like that wag-tailed dog!

2:32 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

great to have that friend along while you are skipping rocks...or just plunking them in the water to make ripples....

2:40 PM  
Blogger alan1704 said...

I can taste the sea breeze in this, beautifully conveyed.

2:57 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Mary, happy you dropped in

Much love...

4:00 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Umanga

Much love...

4:05 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Peggy

Much love...

4:06 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Indeed Brian, happy you stopped by

Much love...

4:07 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Alan

Much love...

4:07 PM  
Blogger Pealogic said...

"his wag tail dog frisks along"

I just loved this line.

4:24 PM  
Blogger SaraV said...

Love the flow of this poem and a pocket full of pebbles to stir the waters... Wonderful! :-)

8:50 PM  
Blogger Sumana Roy said...

such lively scene..could feel the dancing of life here...

6:02 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

How beautiful this is, I love what you write and the designs you show, beautiful, Gillena

9:47 AM  
Blogger rallentanda said...

Nice tranquil beach scene.

11:43 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Pealogic

Much love...

12:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sara

Much love...

12:29 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

Much love...

12:29 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

Much love...

12:30 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rallentanda

Much love...

12:31 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

moonlight on the water
the weight of a pebble

by the ocean
the weight of a pebble
on the moon

7:20 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice! thanks for sharing Bill

much love...

8:04 AM  
Blogger artbyrae said...

very nice

12:03 AM  
Blogger cifar shayar said...

reading and praising , beautiful lines

Pebbles

4:13 AM  
Blogger Gabriella said...

I enjoyed the beach walk you took us on.

2:42 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Rae

Much love...

3:58 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Cifar

Much love...

4:25 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

Much love...

4:26 PM  
Blogger Donna Smith said...

Nothing happier than a "wag tail dog" at the beach! Thanks for the images today.

9:35 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Donna

much love...

4:37 PM  
Blogger Nicholas V said...

A happy serene moment! Lovely, Gillena.

7:22 PM  

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