Saturday, November 15, 2014

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road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues

the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand

--gillena cox



Revisit
stilettos
ply
jig saw




I am blog hopping today at
Carpe-Diem Tan Renga Challenge #59, Panchali's "mystic purple flames"


mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart (© Panchali)

road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues (gillena)

the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand (gillena)



Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart "seashells"

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26 Comments:

Anonymous Dolores said...

Beautiful and mournful!

8:51 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

simply outstanding, simplicity has never been so wonderfully beautiful, only you G.

9:55 AM  
Blogger kaykuala said...

Appropriately matched to the haiku. Good one Gillena!

Hank

11:05 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Dolores

Much love...

2:04 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Lorraine, humble bow

Much love...

2:05 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Hank

Much love...

2:05 PM  
OpenID annieelf2012 said...

Reminds me of sad times in my youth. Those times, in the end, strengthen me.

2:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Annie

much love...

2:59 PM  
Blogger Mark M. Redfearn said...

There's something lonely---and mysterious---about this incense seller.

Late Haiku My Heart

9:17 PM  
Blogger foxysue said...

I'm detecting a delicate musk, set among orange hues...beautiful. x

3:55 AM  
Blogger Rajesh said...

Good one.

1:57 PM  
Blogger Lea said...

This is oh so beautiful and poignant... your words have painted quite a picture for me...

2:24 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the juxtaposition of the incense sticks and the bright skirt,

3:56 PM  
Blogger Georgia Koch said...

like your renga ... very nicely done!

1:10 AM  
Blogger Usha Menon said...

Very poignant, Gillena.

4:40 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mark

Much love...

12:04 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sue

Much love...

12:05 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rajesh

Much love...

12:06 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

Much love...

12:07 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Juilet

Much love...

12:08 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Georgia

Much love...

12:09 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Usha

Much love...

12:10 PM  
Blogger Kristjaan Panneman said...

Beautiful continuation Gillena

6:31 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Kristjaan

much love...

10:36 AM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

As Rebecca suggested, please use last week’s link to share your new haiku for November 21st. Click here for the link: Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon

Thank you!

8:22 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Maggie

much love...

4:09 PM  

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