Saturday, November 15, 2014

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road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues

the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand

--gillena cox



Revisit
stilettos
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jig saw




I am blog hopping today at
Carpe-Diem Tan Renga Challenge #59, Panchali's "mystic purple flames"


mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart (© Panchali)

road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues (gillena)

the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand (gillena)



Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart "seashells"

26 comments:

Dolores said...

Beautiful and mournful!

Lorraine Renaud said...

simply outstanding, simplicity has never been so wonderfully beautiful, only you G.

kaykuala said...

Appropriately matched to the haiku. Good one Gillena!

Hank

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Dolores

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Lorraine, humble bow

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Hank

Much love...

Anonymous said...

Reminds me of sad times in my youth. Those times, in the end, strengthen me.

Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Annie

much love...

Mark M. Redfearn said...

There's something lonely---and mysterious---about this incense seller.

Late Haiku My Heart

foxysue said...

I'm detecting a delicate musk, set among orange hues...beautiful. x

Rajesh said...

Good one.

Lea said...

This is oh so beautiful and poignant... your words have painted quite a picture for me...

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the juxtaposition of the incense sticks and the bright skirt,

Georgia Koch said...

like your renga ... very nicely done!

Usha Menon said...

Very poignant, Gillena.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mark

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sue

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rajesh

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Juilet

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Georgia

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Usha

Much love...

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Beautiful continuation Gillena

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Kristjaan

much love...

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

As Rebecca suggested, please use last week’s link to share your new haiku for November 21st. Click here for the link: Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon

Thank you!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Maggie

much love...