Wednesday, April 15, 2015

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the rumbling earth -
thoughts of angry gods seep through
the control of breath

© gillena cox






Carpe Diem #707, Breath Control

18 comments:

B i r g i t t a said...

Great haiku - I almost feel a nordic ancient touch :)
(thinking about thunder and Thor)

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Birgitta

Much love...

Dolores Fegan said...

Very nicely done!

Cheryl Lynn said...

very nice, your haiku proves how powerful a "controlled breath" can be...warding off thunder and angst within. Blessings x

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Dolores

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl Lynn

much love...

Out of Sight L said...

.....WOW Gillena I felt the power of the earth, and the coming of Spring, i love this

Magyar said...

Nice. _m

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Lorraine

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Magyar

Much love...

carol l mckenna said...

lovely nature haiku for breath!

Happy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol

girl friday said...

they do, don't they.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Carol

Much love...

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

If the gods were angry, I'd be breathless too!

Janice Adcock said...

Great response!

Gillena Cox said...

(◕‿◕。) thanks for dropping in girl friday

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Maggie

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thanks Janice

much love...