Wednesday, April 15, 2015

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the rumbling earth -
thoughts of angry gods seep through
the control of breath

© gillena cox






Carpe Diem #707, Breath Control

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18 Comments:

Anonymous B i r g i t t a said...

Great haiku - I almost feel a nordic ancient touch :)
(thinking about thunder and Thor)

5:59 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Birgitta

Much love...

7:27 PM  
Blogger Dolores Fegan said...

Very nicely done!

10:18 PM  
Blogger Cheryl Lynn said...

very nice, your haiku proves how powerful a "controlled breath" can be...warding off thunder and angst within. Blessings x

10:55 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Dolores

much love...

7:58 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl Lynn

much love...

7:59 AM  
Blogger Out of Sight L said...

.....WOW Gillena I felt the power of the earth, and the coming of Spring, i love this

9:35 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Nice. _m

10:14 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Lorraine

Much love...

10:22 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in Magyar

Much love...

10:23 AM  
Blogger carol l mckenna said...

lovely nature haiku for breath!

Happy Weekend to you,
artmusedog and carol

12:17 PM  
Blogger girl friday said...

they do, don't they.

12:22 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Carol

Much love...

12:40 PM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

If the gods were angry, I'd be breathless too!

1:04 PM  
Blogger Janice Adcock said...

Great response!

2:32 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

(◕‿◕。) thanks for dropping in girl friday

much love...

3:22 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Maggie

much love...

3:23 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thanks Janice

much love...

3:24 PM  

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