drenching rain -
the night absorbs tears
of angels
❧✿❧
wing beats -
above the realm of night
moon beams
❧✿❧
Thunder moon -
every lullaby given
wasted dreams
❧✿❧
tomorrow calls -
at the edge of a dream
roosting birds
© gillena cox
Revisit
July rain 2008
July rain 2014
Sunday Lime 1
well, well, that was a serious statement of rain last night; Its the first Sunday of this July and #40 in the series 'Sunday Lime';
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Carpe Diem #768 tsuyu (rainy season)
49 comments:
Nice
Intense.............feelings
We were high I in the mountains yesterday and driving into the clouds full of rain. It was pretty amazing. Cool to think of them as Angel tears. You give them nice emotion in this
Thank you for your appreciation Vandana
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Amazing!
Have a blessed new week
thanks for dropping by and linking in Mascha
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aw...you've beautified rain so gorgeously and with much emotion Gillena...beautiful :)
Thanks for your appreciation Sumana
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Absolutely lovely...especially the imagery of angel's tears.
The first haiku... splendid one :)
Such a gorgeous piece :D
Beautifully penned!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
These are beautiful. I especially love the "tears of angels".
Thanks CC
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Happy you dropped in Sanaa
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Thanks Sherry
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the sex
of angels
summer stars
interesting and lovely images.
The thunder moon is such an interesting image.. there are so much to see in nature.
What a lovely collection!
i grew up thinking someone in heaven is crying. lovely write especially the first one.
Beautiful responses to the image!
Lovely and I adored the opening stanza!
The angels have much to cry over...so expect another drenching!
beyond lovely, beyond everything, my heart beats for such beauty dear dear Gillena, if I haven't told you before this is my new blog ; http://photographl.blogspot.ca/
I have a poem on angels' tears coming up in my Sketchbook Project. It must be something in the air...
interesting thought Bill thanks for sharing
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think its called Simpatico; thanks for dropping in Diane
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Edges of dreams are hard..especially when it's the edge nudging you into 'real' life..a nice reflection and celebration of magical things that can happen in the night
So many beautiful ways to imagine the rain.
The night is long but we do enough the dawn.
Gillena,
The rain has been to visit here as well and returned this morning. I'm disappointed as my outdoor plans are now languishing in pots!!
Eileen
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Thank you for your appreciation GL
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Thanks for dropping in Eileen
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These were so pleasant to read. Glad you had rain.
Thanks Myrna
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Beautiful... as usual
ZQ
Happy you dropped by RK
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