Thursday, August 06, 2015

1717

image courtesy Carpe Diem


stone upon stone
sweat of slaves in the desert
year upon year

the precision of
pyramids to encapsule
bones and dust

dust
sweat
for miles
the sun shines
directly on them
these labouring men pity of
wives and children hungry for a little daily bread
their product the fancy of pharaohs future generations easy to inherit
© gillena cox 2015


blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem #790 The Great Pyramid of Giza

secrets
hidden inside
now outside


sun
moon
star light
the breeze
this summer morning
birds singing their beautiful songs -
young sparrows playing hide and seek in the dry sand of the garden
© Chèvrefeuille


Chèvrefeuille's Fibo-ku[2014] follows the Fibonacci sequence in haiku, as follows:
1st line 1 syllable; 2nd line 1 syllable; 3rd line 2 syllables; 4th line 3 syllables and so on as is the Fibonacci sequence 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34, 55, 89 and so on.

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10 Comments:

Blogger lynn__ said...

You really captured the intensity of the labor involved!

6:12 AM  
Blogger Diane Mayr said...

Interesting in the words and in how it appears on the page. Very nice.

7:44 AM  
Blogger Kristjaan Panneman said...

Great fibo-ku Gillena you caught the image of the hard labour of the slaves to create the pyramids ... very well done.

1:46 PM  
Anonymous Reading Pleasure said...

Great take, Gillena.

2:15 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Lynn

Much love...

2:59 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by Diane

Much love...

2:59 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Kristjaan

Much love...

3:00 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Celestine

Much love...

3:00 PM  
Anonymous jazzytower said...

Great imagery here Gillena. Nicely done.

9:47 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thanks Jazzy

much love...

4:41 AM  

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