Thursday, March 10, 2016

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this weird woman counts
syllables on her fingers-
freezing dawn's bird songs

© gillena cox 2016


Written for Sumana's prompt
Mid week motif ~ weird

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22 Comments:

Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love the closing line especially.

12:59 PM  
Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is pure perfection :D

1:10 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by to read mine Sherry

Much love...

1:29 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

Much love...

1:29 PM  
Blogger Blogoratti said...

Really subtle and divine.

1:58 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in blogoratti

much love...

3:36 PM  
Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Ha ha ha – a bit of fun which suddenly, in that last line, becomes much more.

5:03 PM  
Blogger Hannah said...

Yes, I count like that, too! This resonates...guess I'm weird as well!! :) Great poem and presentation, Gillena.

5:54 PM  
Blogger vanderloost said...

Wonderful

5:01 AM  
Blogger Susan said...

Haha! I wonder if you do this or if it's something you saw? I like the image very much.

8:37 AM  
Blogger Diane Mayr said...

So many of us are weirdos, it's too bad we're not closer together!

8:45 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rosemary

Much love...

8:58 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

LOL happy you dropped by Hannah

Much love...

8:58 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in to read mine Vanderloost

Much love...

8:59 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Yes Susan I count on fingers when writing haiku

LOL
thanks for dropping in Susan

Much love...

9:00 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

(✿◠‿◠) Happy you dropped in Diane

much love...

9:35 AM  
Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

Love the movement. And yes, the shivering last line! ♥

10:48 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

__Nice Gillena_!
Sounds form, the links of this tempo; hawks soar.
_m

5:17 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Magaly

Much love...

10:43 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your sharing Magyar

Much love...

10:43 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Sunday or Monday
the same table
at the cafe

Adelaide

9:31 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Adelaide, thanks for leaving a share of your haiku

much love...

7:38 PM  

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