Thursday, March 10, 2016

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this weird woman counts
syllables on her fingers-
freezing dawn's bird songs

© gillena cox 2016


Written for Sumana's prompt
Mid week motif ~ weird

22 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love the closing line especially.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is pure perfection :D

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping by to read mine Sherry

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

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Blogoratti said...

Really subtle and divine.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in blogoratti

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Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Ha ha ha – a bit of fun which suddenly, in that last line, becomes much more.

Hannah said...

Yes, I count like that, too! This resonates...guess I'm weird as well!! :) Great poem and presentation, Gillena.

vanderloost said...

Wonderful

Susan said...

Haha! I wonder if you do this or if it's something you saw? I like the image very much.

Diane Mayr said...

So many of us are weirdos, it's too bad we're not closer together!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Rosemary

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Gillena Cox said...

LOL happy you dropped by Hannah

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in to read mine Vanderloost

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Gillena Cox said...

Yes Susan I count on fingers when writing haiku

LOL
thanks for dropping in Susan

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Gillena Cox said...

(✿◠‿◠) Happy you dropped in Diane

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Magaly Guerrero said...

Love the movement. And yes, the shivering last line! ♥

Magyar said...

__Nice Gillena_!
Sounds form, the links of this tempo; hawks soar.
_m

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Magaly

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your sharing Magyar

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Adelaide said...

Sunday or Monday
the same table
at the cafe

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Adelaide, thanks for leaving a share of your haiku

much love...