Lunch Break: 1865

Thursday, March 10, 2016

1865

this weird woman counts
syllables on her fingers-
freezing dawn's bird songs
© gillena cox 2016

Written for Sumana's prompt
Mid week motif ~ weird

21 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...: I love the closing line especially.; 12:59 PM
Sanaa Rizvi said...: This is pure perfection :D; 1:10 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping by to read mine Sherry

Much love...; 1:29 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

Much love...; 1:29 PM
Blogoratti said...: Really subtle and divine.; 1:58 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in blogoratti

much love...; 3:36 PM
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...: Ha ha ha – a bit of fun which suddenly, in that last line, becomes much more.; 5:03 PM
Hannah said...: Yes, I count like that, too! This resonates...guess I'm weird as well!! :) Great poem and presentation, Gillena.; 5:54 PM
Susan said...: Haha! I wonder if you do this or if it's something you saw? I like the image very much.; 8:37 AM
Diane Mayr said...: So many of us are weirdos, it's too bad we're not closer together!; 8:45 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Rosemary

Much love...; 8:58 AM
Gillena Cox said...: LOL happy you dropped by Hannah

Much love...; 8:58 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in to read mine Vanderloost

Much love...; 8:59 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Yes Susan I count on fingers when writing haiku

LOL
thanks for dropping in Susan

Much love...; 9:00 AM
Gillena Cox said...: (✿◠‿◠) Happy you dropped in Diane

much love...; 9:35 AM
Magaly Guerrero said...: Love the movement. And yes, the shivering last line! ♥; 10:48 AM
Magyar said...: __Nice Gillena_!
Sounds form, the links of this tempo; hawks soar.
_m; 5:17 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Magaly

Much love...; 10:43 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for your sharing Magyar

Much love...; 10:43 AM
Adelaide said...: Sunday or Monday
the same table
at the cafe

Adelaide; 9:31 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Adelaide, thanks for leaving a share of your haiku

much love...; 7:38 PM