Saturday, August 12, 2017


[Maracas Beach a 2016 photo]

with every gust of wind
an old plastic bag in the street
tumbling tumbling

an old plastic bag in the street
travels the way of a wayfarer
is this freedom i muse

tumbling tumbling
without a doubt this age old song
waves at the beach

© gillena cox 2017

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Chèvrefeuille's Gift #6 gust of wind

Chèvrefeuille gave us the line " with every gust of wind" and he asked that we create a haiku with this first line and then, have created it, create a Troiku with it.

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Blogger humbird said...

Love it! so light hearted, relaxing...

12:10 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thanks for your appreciation Humbird

much love...

12:47 PM  
Blogger Kristjaan Panneman said...

Very nicely created from that first line, I like the Troiku too you have created with your haiku.

11:20 PM  
Blogger Kim Russell said...

Nicely done, Gillena!I like the old plastic bag tumbling its way to freedom.

3:29 AM  
Blogger gillena cox said...

Happy you dropped by to read mine Kristjaan

Much love...

7:31 AM  
Blogger gillena cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Kim

Much love...

7:31 AM  
Blogger lynn__ said...

I like this wayfaring song tumbling along the beach :)

3:09 PM  
Blogger Nosaint said...

I loved "Is this freedom, I muse" and then the comparison of the tumbling to the waves and wild freedom of the ocean. Very nice!

8:43 AM  
Blogger Sara McNulty said...

I love this, Gillena! Nothing like freedom.

8:33 PM  
Blogger عبده العمراوى said...

شركة قمة الدقة للخدمات المنزلية
شركة مكافحة حشرات بالجبيل
شركة كشف تسربات المياه بالخبر

3:40 AM  

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