Thursday, November 07, 2013

1316


back door...
tints of sunrise
a cool draft

dogs yelping
through golden trance...
front door

--gillena cox

Linked to Poetry Jam: What Do You Know for Sure?


48 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS

32 comments:

judie said...

Love this poetry. It puts me THERE!

Cressida de Nova said...

Very nice haiku

Helen said...

Entrancing ....

humbird said...

Enjoyed with you all important moments here...nice

Mary said...

Fascinating snippets of life! Smiles.

Brian Miller said...

we know what we see...
i like the sun...
it reminds us the light
has come

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Judie

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by Cressida

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Helen, happy you stopped by

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Humbird

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

glad you stopped by Mary

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Brian

much love...

Gabriella said...

I enjoy the serene atmosphere of your poem!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Gabriella

much love...

Peggy said...

Lovely sense of atmosphere here.

alan1704 said...

tints of sunrise - this is lovely and works so well. Very captivating.

Gillena Cox said...

glad you stopped by Peggy

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Alan

much love...

Adelaide said...

By the way,

I hope you like the calendar.

Adelaide

Adelaide said...

My ealier post did not show what I wrote:

at the windows
a knocking wind
wants inside

Adelaide

Pia Rom said...

Wonderful poetry...so alive! ♥ Conny
Piaroms Art Journaling

Lorraine said...

want in from both the front and the back and I can't wait for Christmas, lovely, Gillena, always

Leovi said...

Beautiful sunrises tinted with beautiful projects!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Love the action that goes on with dogs and doors.......and far down the page I found your closing stanza about the wind. Cool!

Laurie Kolp said...

Fascinating.

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for sharing Adelaide, and i have received my 2014 haiku calendar and i like it a lot


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Conny

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for dropping in Lorraine; view of sunrises at the back door and sunsets at the front door

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for your appreciation Leovi

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Sherry


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Laurie

much love...

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Your poem me smile since my dogs are often yelping by the front door!