Friday, November 08, 2013

1317


by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells

--JRB

sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages

--gillena cox


47 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS



by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages


Linking today to Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “#319 - Shell” AND Haiku My Heart
AND
Orange You Glad It’s Friday #63
Orange You Glad It's Friday

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46 Comments:

Anonymous Reading Pleasure said...

wonderful completion, Gillena. I can hear the sounds!

12:11 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Celestine


much love...

12:34 PM  
Blogger Lmkazmierczak said...

Enjoyed your prose♪ Have recently attempted my own Haiku and am always engaged when I see other's♥
visiting from OYGIF but here's my Haiku link: http://lauriekazmierczak.com/xoxo/

2:41 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Laurie; thanks for leaving a link; i'll visit


much love...

3:14 PM  
Blogger Spadoman said...

Now I feel guilty. I know I should read more. I have a problem with concentration, but that is an excuse. I like the mixture of words and the theme running, (flowing), through. Very nice.

Peace

4:11 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Spadoman

much love...

4:29 PM  
Anonymous WabiSabi said...

I love how you shifted and made the poem your own!! Nice to see you at Carpe Diem!

6:38 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Wabisabi thank you for your appreciation


much love...

6:57 PM  
Blogger Cathy Keller said...

Now I want to walk on the beach...searching for the lovers! Wonderful haiku! Cathy

8:44 PM  
Blogger rebecca said...

i am love struck for your haiku magic.

9:30 PM  
Blogger Lea said...

I love the thought of pages, love letters, and the sound of listening to shells...

10:33 PM  
OpenID howanxious said...

Oh! Wonderful. :-)
-HA

5:22 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

Ocean and Christmas my two favourite things, I love this, 'o Holy Night

6:02 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Cathy

much love...

6:16 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Welcome back Rebecca, hope you had a nice trip

much love...

6:18 AM  
Blogger aspiritofsimplicity said...

very nice. I like that sound.

6:19 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

much love...

6:19 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Anmol

much love...

6:20 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by Lorraine

much love...

6:22 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

'aspiritofsimplicity'
Thank you for your appreciation


much love...

6:25 AM  
OpenID jrbhaiku said...

This is a wonderful conclusion to my haiku. I love where you have taken it!

by the shore

6:28 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks JRB; glad you dropped in


much love...

7:38 AM  
Blogger judie said...

Wow, chills. My next walk on the beach will be for lovers, and lost loves

10:04 AM  
Blogger Hazel Ceej said...

So I listen... They're marching. In my mind.

Hazel

11:20 AM  
Blogger gma said...

VERY COOL HOW YOU SWITCHED THIS AROUND. <3

11:52 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Judie SMILES, glad you dropped in

much love...

11:59 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Hazel

much love...

12:00 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Gemma, thank you for your appreciation

much love...

12:00 PM  
Blogger Laura said...

Beautiful series Gillena! I do hope you'll participate in the Gratitude Quilt this year… information about what it is and how to participate can be found @ this link http://www.shinethedivinecreativityisaspiritualpractice.com/p/gratitude-quilt.html

If I already asked you and you sent me something, please forgive me for asking again. I'm trying to reach as many people as possible.

12:37 PM  
Blogger Karen S. said...

Lovely Haiku magical to read!

2:08 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Laura, i'll visit


much love...

3:27 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped y Karen


much love...

3:28 PM  
Blogger Björn said...

Wonderful completion... really

5:31 PM  
OpenID Redondowriter said...

Very intriguing, separately and as stanzas, or whatever they are called in haiku. Thanks for sharing.

12:44 AM  
Blogger Annie said...

Anything by the sea makes me happy and this does it very well.

4:05 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bjorn

much love...

10:35 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Redondowriter


much love...

10:36 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Annie


much love...

10:37 AM  
Anonymous Sun said...

wonderful way to complete this one. thank you. ♥

7:54 PM  
Blogger peggy gatto said...

Love this, so thoughtful!!!

1:35 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by SUN

Much love ...

3:50 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Peggy

Much love...

3:52 AM  
Anonymous Maria @ LSS said...

The perfect words for a beautiful photo. Glad you decided to share your photo on Orange you glad it's Friday. Thanks for joining and I hope to see you again next Friday. Have a great weekend.

10:45 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thanks for hosting us at your Friday meme, Maria and happy you dropped in here


much love...

5:25 PM  
Blogger Kristjaan Panneman said...

An extraordinary, so different and strong, completion of the Tan Renga ... well done Gillena. Thank you for sharing.

3:29 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kristjaan

much love...

7:07 AM  

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