Friday, November 08, 2013

1317


by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells

--JRB

sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages

--gillena cox


47 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS



by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages


Linking today to Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “#319 - Shell” AND Haiku My Heart
AND
Orange You Glad It’s Friday #63
Orange You Glad It's Friday

46 comments:

Reading Pleasure said...

wonderful completion, Gillena. I can hear the sounds!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Celestine


much love...

Lmkazmierczak said...

Enjoyed your prose♪ Have recently attempted my own Haiku and am always engaged when I see other's♥
visiting from OYGIF but here's my Haiku link: http://lauriekazmierczak.com/xoxo/

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Laurie; thanks for leaving a link; i'll visit


much love...

Spadoman said...

Now I feel guilty. I know I should read more. I have a problem with concentration, but that is an excuse. I like the mixture of words and the theme running, (flowing), through. Very nice.

Peace

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Spadoman

much love...

WabiSabi said...

I love how you shifted and made the poem your own!! Nice to see you at Carpe Diem!

Gillena Cox said...

Wabisabi thank you for your appreciation


much love...

Cathy Keller said...

Now I want to walk on the beach...searching for the lovers! Wonderful haiku! Cathy

rebecca said...

i am love struck for your haiku magic.

Lea said...

I love the thought of pages, love letters, and the sound of listening to shells...

Anonymous said...

Oh! Wonderful. :-)
-HA

Lorraine said...

Ocean and Christmas my two favourite things, I love this, 'o Holy Night

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Cathy

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Welcome back Rebecca, hope you had a nice trip

much love...

aspiritofsimplicity said...

very nice. I like that sound.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lea

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by Anmol

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by Lorraine

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

'aspiritofsimplicity'
Thank you for your appreciation


much love...

Anonymous said...

This is a wonderful conclusion to my haiku. I love where you have taken it!

by the shore

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks JRB; glad you dropped in


much love...

judie said...

Wow, chills. My next walk on the beach will be for lovers, and lost loves

Hazel Ceej said...

So I listen... They're marching. In my mind.

Hazel

gma said...

VERY COOL HOW YOU SWITCHED THIS AROUND. <3

Gillena Cox said...

Judie SMILES, glad you dropped in

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thank you for your appreciation Hazel

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Gemma, thank you for your appreciation

much love...

Laura said...

Beautiful series Gillena! I do hope you'll participate in the Gratitude Quilt this year… information about what it is and how to participate can be found @ this link http://www.shinethedivinecreativityisaspiritualpractice.com/p/gratitude-quilt.html

If I already asked you and you sent me something, please forgive me for asking again. I'm trying to reach as many people as possible.

Karen S. said...

Lovely Haiku magical to read!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Laura, i'll visit


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped y Karen


much love...

Björn said...

Wonderful completion... really

Anonymous said...

Very intriguing, separately and as stanzas, or whatever they are called in haiku. Thanks for sharing.

Annie said...

Anything by the sea makes me happy and this does it very well.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bjorn

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Redondowriter


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Annie


much love...

Sun said...

wonderful way to complete this one. thank you. ♥

peggy gatto said...

Love this, so thoughtful!!!

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by SUN

Much love ...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Peggy

Much love...

Maria @ LSS said...

The perfect words for a beautiful photo. Glad you decided to share your photo on Orange you glad it's Friday. Thanks for joining and I hope to see you again next Friday. Have a great weekend.

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for hosting us at your Friday meme, Maria and happy you dropped in here


much love...

Kristjaan Panneman said...

An extraordinary, so different and strong, completion of the Tan Renga ... well done Gillena. Thank you for sharing.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kristjaan

much love...