by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
--JRB
sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages
--gillena cox
47 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS
by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages
Linking today to Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “#319 - Shell” AND Haiku My Heart
AND Orange You Glad It’s Friday #63
45 comments:
wonderful completion, Gillena. I can hear the sounds!
Thank you for your appreciation Celestine
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Enjoyed your prose♪ Have recently attempted my own Haiku and am always engaged when I see other's♥
visiting from OYGIF but here's my Haiku link: http://lauriekazmierczak.com/xoxo/
happy you stopped by Laurie; thanks for leaving a link; i'll visit
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Now I feel guilty. I know I should read more. I have a problem with concentration, but that is an excuse. I like the mixture of words and the theme running, (flowing), through. Very nice.
Peace
Thanks for your appreciation Spadoman
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I love how you shifted and made the poem your own!! Nice to see you at Carpe Diem!
Wabisabi thank you for your appreciation
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Now I want to walk on the beach...searching for the lovers! Wonderful haiku! Cathy
i am love struck for your haiku magic.
I love the thought of pages, love letters, and the sound of listening to shells...
Oh! Wonderful. :-)
-HA
Ocean and Christmas my two favourite things, I love this, 'o Holy Night
happy you stopped by Cathy
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Welcome back Rebecca, hope you had a nice trip
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very nice. I like that sound.
happy you stopped by Anmol
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Thanks for stopping by Lorraine
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'aspiritofsimplicity'
Thank you for your appreciation
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This is a wonderful conclusion to my haiku. I love where you have taken it!
by the shore
Thanks JRB; glad you dropped in
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Wow, chills. My next walk on the beach will be for lovers, and lost loves
So I listen... They're marching. In my mind.
Hazel
VERY COOL HOW YOU SWITCHED THIS AROUND. <3
Judie SMILES, glad you dropped in
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thank you for your appreciation Hazel
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Gemma, thank you for your appreciation
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Beautiful series Gillena! I do hope you'll participate in the Gratitude Quilt this year… information about what it is and how to participate can be found @ this link http://www.shinethedivinecreativityisaspiritualpractice.com/p/gratitude-quilt.html
If I already asked you and you sent me something, please forgive me for asking again. I'm trying to reach as many people as possible.
Lovely Haiku magical to read!
Thanks Laura, i'll visit
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happy you stopped y Karen
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Wonderful completion... really
Very intriguing, separately and as stanzas, or whatever they are called in haiku. Thanks for sharing.
Anything by the sea makes me happy and this does it very well.
Thanks Bjorn
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Thanks for your appreciation Redondowriter
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happy you dropped in Annie
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wonderful way to complete this one. thank you. ♥
Love this, so thoughtful!!!
happy you stopped by SUN
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Thanks Peggy
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The perfect words for a beautiful photo. Glad you decided to share your photo on Orange you glad it's Friday. Thanks for joining and I hope to see you again next Friday. Have a great weekend.
thanks for hosting us at your Friday meme, Maria and happy you dropped in here
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An extraordinary, so different and strong, completion of the Tan Renga ... well done Gillena. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Kristjaan
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