Thursday, June 05, 2014

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Moon Fest

just a curve -
what's there to smile about
weekend moon

the crowd from the bar spills out to the pavement

weekend moon -
church goers and fun sayers
share the same beat

--gillena cox

moon
moon
moon
is there a moon


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58 comments:

Peggy said...

Ah yes they all share the same moon for sure. Thanks for linking your poem!!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Peggy

Much love...

Gabriella said...

I like how you unite 'church goers' and 'fun sayers' through the moon. Lovely haiku, Gillena!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

Much love...

Helen said...

I have these images of happy people dancing in the moonlight, thanks to your poetry ...

Kathy Combs said...

Amazing how many scenes the same moon sees playing out below it. Brilliant! ♥

Brian Miller said...

share the same moon too...i like when it is grinning up in the sky at me...

Mary said...

I like the thought that church goers and fun sayers share the same beat. So very true, I think. And I would think when the crowd from the bar spills onto the pavement the moon sees that as well. Smiles.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Helen

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kathy

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Brian

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mary

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Vandana Sharma said...

Lovely way how the moon spreads smiles to one and all:)

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for you appreciation Vandana

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Valerie-Jael said...

Fantastic! Valerie

Diana Evans said...

lovely patterns and colours!!! wonderful work!!!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Valarie

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Diana

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Faye said...

Beautiful. Hope you have a fun-filled weekend.

Anne Jeffries said...

These pretty patterns were enough to make me smile.

Lorraine Renaud said...

and just when I think you can't surprise me with your wit, heart,and art, you surprise me again, bravo Gillena:)

sheila 77 said...

Love the abstract picture you've made from the patterns and that's a terrific poem, I could read all sorts of meanings into it.

Linda said...

wow- I LOVE this Gillena-I think it would make fabulous scarf or skirt!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Bless the moon and how it affects our lives!

gma said...

Oh Gillena, I Love the patterns and designs. And especially love that we share the same moon.

Cynthia of Cynful Creations said...

Those various patterns are fascinating, what a great way to emphasis the beauty of the main image, which compliments the moon poem perfectly!

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Faye, happy you stopped by

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Anne

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Gillena Cox said...

humble bow Lorraine

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Shiela

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Glad you dropped in Linda

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Cynthia

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Gillena Cox said...

Surely Maggie, bless the moon

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WabiSabi said...

I love the many moods that you created with your 'moon series.' Thank you for sharing especially your smiling moon! :)

Lea said...

Love this Gillena, for so many reasons... from your art to the haiku and the weekend moon that will shine here... and I'm smiling being here! :-)

Wendy Bourke said...

The moon is a commonality all people share. We can be in different places, and look into the night sky and see the same moon, it’s true. What I love about your poem is the way you’ve captured people in the same place, in different places – from bars to church. Very clever, Gillena.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Gemma

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Wabi

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Lea

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Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Wendy

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Abigail Davidson said...

The poem and artwork are beautiful together, and lovely patterning! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing!

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Abigail

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Arnoldo L. Romero, MLA said...

I love your effective use of imagery in your poetry. Blessings!

alan1704 said...

Full of spiritual and romantic emotion.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you A r naldo

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Alan

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rebecca said...

you have stirred gorgeous moonlit memories in this heart of mine.
thank you for each one...
wink.

Adelaide said...

I love the way you put the pieces together and the poem.

Adelaide

judie said...

Amazing design!

JKW said...

I love the poem and the accompanying art is creative. The poem speaks to me through my experiences. Beautiful. Blessings, Janet PPF

Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Rebecca

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Adelaide

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Judie

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Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Janet

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Mary Ann Potter said...

I loved the line "sharing the same beat." Your poem is artistically done! Sending blessings.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Mary Ann

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Penny Stewart said...

Nice Haiku. Poetry brings a calmness to life. YOu stop and hear the music.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by Penny

Much love...