Thursday, June 05, 2014

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Moon Fest

just a curve -
what's there to smile about
weekend moon

the crowd from the bar spills out to the pavement

weekend moon -
church goers and fun sayers
share the same beat

--gillena cox

moon
moon
moon
is there a moon


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58 Comments:

Blogger Peggy said...

Ah yes they all share the same moon for sure. Thanks for linking your poem!!

5:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Peggy

Much love...

6:11 PM  
Blogger Gabriella said...

I like how you unite 'church goers' and 'fun sayers' through the moon. Lovely haiku, Gillena!

6:15 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

Much love...

6:35 PM  
Blogger Helen said...

I have these images of happy people dancing in the moonlight, thanks to your poetry ...

6:57 PM  
Blogger Kathy Combs said...

Amazing how many scenes the same moon sees playing out below it. Brilliant! ♥

7:40 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

share the same moon too...i like when it is grinning up in the sky at me...

9:35 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

I like the thought that church goers and fun sayers share the same beat. So very true, I think. And I would think when the crowd from the bar spills onto the pavement the moon sees that as well. Smiles.

9:45 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Helen

Much love...

10:14 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kathy

Much love...

10:15 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Brian

Much love...

10:17 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mary

Much love...

10:18 PM  
Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

Lovely way how the moon spreads smiles to one and all:)

12:15 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for you appreciation Vandana

Much love...

6:07 AM  
Blogger Valerie-Jael said...

Fantastic! Valerie

6:49 AM  
Blogger Diana Evans said...

lovely patterns and colours!!! wonderful work!!!

7:53 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Valarie

much love...

10:06 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Diana

much love...

10:06 AM  
Blogger Faye said...

Beautiful. Hope you have a fun-filled weekend.

10:53 AM  
Blogger Anne Jeffries said...

These pretty patterns were enough to make me smile.

11:58 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

and just when I think you can't surprise me with your wit, heart,and art, you surprise me again, bravo Gillena:)

11:59 AM  
Blogger sheila 77 said...

Love the abstract picture you've made from the patterns and that's a terrific poem, I could read all sorts of meanings into it.

12:10 PM  
Blogger Linda said...

wow- I LOVE this Gillena-I think it would make fabulous scarf or skirt!!

12:49 PM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Bless the moon and how it affects our lives!

1:05 PM  
Blogger gma said...

Oh Gillena, I Love the patterns and designs. And especially love that we share the same moon.

1:37 PM  
Blogger Cynthia of Cynful Creations said...

Those various patterns are fascinating, what a great way to emphasis the beauty of the main image, which compliments the moon poem perfectly!

2:18 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Faye, happy you stopped by

much love...

3:45 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Anne

much love...

3:46 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

humble bow Lorraine

much love...

3:47 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Shiela

much love...

3:48 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Glad you dropped in Linda

much love...

3:49 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Cynthia

much love...

3:49 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Surely Maggie, bless the moon

much love...

3:50 PM  
Anonymous WabiSabi said...

I love the many moods that you created with your 'moon series.' Thank you for sharing especially your smiling moon! :)

4:15 PM  
Blogger Lea said...

Love this Gillena, for so many reasons... from your art to the haiku and the weekend moon that will shine here... and I'm smiling being here! :-)

4:59 PM  
Blogger Wendy Bourke said...

The moon is a commonality all people share. We can be in different places, and look into the night sky and see the same moon, it’s true. What I love about your poem is the way you’ve captured people in the same place, in different places – from bars to church. Very clever, Gillena.

5:41 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Gemma

Much love...

6:26 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Wabi

Much love...

6:27 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Lea

Much love...

6:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Wendy

Much love...

6:29 PM  
Blogger Abigail Davidson said...

The poem and artwork are beautiful together, and lovely patterning! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing!

10:07 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Abigail

Much love...

2:46 AM  
Blogger Arnoldo L. Romero, MLA said...

I love your effective use of imagery in your poetry. Blessings!

2:51 AM  
Blogger alan1704 said...

Full of spiritual and romantic emotion.

6:51 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you A r naldo

Much love...

8:05 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Alan

Much love...

8:05 AM  
Blogger rebecca said...

you have stirred gorgeous moonlit memories in this heart of mine.
thank you for each one...
wink.

9:08 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I love the way you put the pieces together and the poem.

Adelaide

10:21 AM  
Blogger judie said...

Amazing design!

12:42 PM  
Blogger JKW said...

I love the poem and the accompanying art is creative. The poem speaks to me through my experiences. Beautiful. Blessings, Janet PPF

12:55 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Rebecca

Much love...

1:38 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Adelaide

Much love...

1:38 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Judie

Much love...

1:39 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Glad you stopped by Janet

Much love...

1:40 PM  
Anonymous Mary Ann Potter said...

I loved the line "sharing the same beat." Your poem is artistically done! Sending blessings.

3:17 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Mary Ann

Much love...

12:51 PM  
Blogger Penny Stewart said...

Nice Haiku. Poetry brings a calmness to life. YOu stop and hear the music.

11:55 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by Penny

Much love...

2:49 PM  

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