Wednesday, June 11, 2014

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image from google dot com

lost in its magic
the sunset wrapped in thoughts
securely golden

gold gilts the sky
the kisadees find shelter
for the span of night

silhouettes weave
the night for dream seekers
loss of bird songs

solace found
fullness of cooling breezes
twinkling stars

to share a wish
one such falling star plunges
lost to fantasy

moon rays
fill spaces lost to mind sight
dreams filter in
--gillena cox



i am blog hopping today at Poetry Jam the prompt is "lost and found"

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26 Comments:

Blogger Brian Miller said...

oo i like falling stars...and both day and night have their magic...some are lost for a few hours so we can enjoy the magic of the other...cool take...

9:50 AM  
Blogger Swathi Shenoy said...

Good one :) I always wanted to wish on a falling star but never have seen one. Send one my way next time you see it ;)

12:07 PM  
Blogger Gabriella said...

I enjoyed the peaceful and serene tone of your poem, Gillena. It feels dreams can indeed 'filter in'.

12:30 PM  
Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Very beautiful imagery, Gillena. I especially love "silhouettes weave the night for dream seekers", being a dream seeker myself!

12:31 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Brian

Much love...

1:01 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Will do Swathi , for sure, happy you dropped in

Much love...

1:02 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Gabrielle, happy you dropped in

Much love...

1:03 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Sherry

Much love...

1:04 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

You have created a lovely scene here and used such beautiful language. I love 'the sunset wrapped in thoughts.'

1:49 PM  
Blogger alan1704 said...

Beautiful images and pictures, falling stars that capture our hearts,

1:49 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mary

Much love...

2:46 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you stopped by Alan

Much love...

2:47 PM  
Anonymous Madwoman said...

Wonderful--I love the falling stars too!

11:28 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Madwoman , thanks for stopping by

Much love...

3:28 AM  
Blogger Donna Smith said...

"one such falling star plunges
lost to fantasy"
Never thought of it as lost to fantasy...but it is.
Lovely poem!

9:42 AM  
Blogger rallentanda said...

Spirtual and beautiful.

11:08 AM  
Blogger Sumana Roy said...

"to share a wish
one such falling star plunges
lost to fantasy"...my favorite portion Gillena..i love how beautiful images come in one by one and take their place truly like dreams...a
beautiful write..

12:31 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

Much love...

12:58 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

The last stanza is breath-taking. I love the idea of moon rays filling spaces lost to mind sight! But I really DID enjoy all the language in this poem.

4:59 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Mary

Much love...

7:45 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Each individual haiku is breathtaking.

Adelaide

8:59 PM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

This is amazing oh Gillena you are sprouting magic, wow

9:15 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Adelaide

much love...

10:35 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Lorraine

much love...

10:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

after the birds
have grown silent
the evening breeze

12:17 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for stopping by and sharing your lovely haiku Bill

Much love...

12:44 PM  

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