A haiku haiga dialogue, enhancing the simple talent of appreciation...
Nice that you tried the puente, Gillena! Hope you get that cup of sugar, and maybe an invitation to coffee too.
Hats off for attempting the puente! Well penned!
oh yes.. there is always a good reason to fetch a cup of sugar
Ha I like this one. Sashaying the hips as a prelude to borrowing a cup of sugar. Good luck! Rife wirhcliches is good too.
nicely done, and great use of the prompt.
a great job done to the puente!!
oh my....me thinks you might come away with more than sugar....smiles....great job on the form....
Sometimes one can be thankful one is in need of sugar. Smiles.
great use of the form...and the last stanza made me smile... :)
(◕‿◕。) thank you for stopping by GabriellaMuch Love…
Thanks Umangmuch love...
Thanks for dropping in Bjornmuch love...
(◕‿◕。) thank you for your appreciation RallentandaMuch Love…
Thanks Alanmuch love...
Thanks Arushimuch love...
(◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in BrianMuch Love…
(◕‿◕。) Happy you stopped by MaryMuch Love…
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This tastes absolutely delightful, you deserve it all dear Gillena
A wonderful puente!
~ perfect ~
Thanks for dropping in Lorrainemuch love...
Thanks Lauriemuch love...
glad you stopped by Helenmuch love...
The ants just have no idea what's going on across the street!
◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in DonnaMuch Love…
You worked the form to perfection! Loved the sashaying of the hips, smiles. Way to borrow sugar!
Lovely puente form. And I just love the word shashay--had not thought of it in a long time. Great image with the ripe fruit.
Gillena you totally nailed this form! Love that third stanza, made me laugh out loud! Absolutely wonderful :-D
Thanks SherryMuch love...
Thank you for your appreciation PeggyMuch love...
Glad you dropped in SaraMuch love...
Oh, kind of a sassy one--love it!
looks like that sugar is going to be too sweet..smiles..very nice Gillena:)
Happy you visited Madwoman Much love...
Thanks Arathi Much love..
Moving from a beautiful moment to a winking, knowing moment - each part of this poem is beautiful. I tip my hat to you! Loving this puente poem.
Thanks for your appreciation blogit Much love...
A delightful Puente - with just a dash of sensuality.
Thanks Wendy, happy you stopped bymuch love...
it reminds me of the sweet times
What a beautiful bridge you've written here, a great job!
Happy you dropped in ThomasMuch love...
Thanks Bastet Much love...
Very nice use of the puente form! It was impossible not to smile when reading that last stanza. Lovely!
Glad i made you smile mrs-minervaMuch love...
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Nice that you tried the puente, Gillena! Hope you get that cup of sugar, and maybe an invitation to coffee too.
Hats off for attempting the puente! Well penned!
oh yes.. there is always a good reason to fetch a cup of sugar
Ha I like this one. Sashaying the hips as a prelude to borrowing a cup of sugar. Good luck! Rife wirh
cliches is good too.
nicely done, and great use of the prompt.
a great job done to the puente!!
oh my....me thinks you might come away with more than sugar....smiles....great job on the form....
Sometimes one can be thankful one is in need of sugar. Smiles.
great use of the form...and the last stanza made me smile... :)
(◕‿◕。) thank you for stopping by Gabriella
Much Love…
Thanks Umang
much love...
Thanks for dropping in Bjorn
much love...
(◕‿◕。) thank you for your appreciation Rallentanda
Much Love…
Thanks Alan
much love...
Thanks Arushi
much love...
(◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in Brian
Much Love…
(◕‿◕。) Happy you stopped by Mary
Much Love…
(◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in Sumana
Much Love…
This tastes absolutely delightful, you deserve it all dear Gillena
A wonderful puente!
~ perfect ~
Thanks for dropping in Lorraine
much love...
Thanks Laurie
much love...
glad you stopped by Helen
much love...
The ants just have no idea what's going on across the street!
◕‿◕。) Happy you dropped in Donna
Much Love…
You worked the form to perfection! Loved the sashaying of the hips, smiles. Way to borrow sugar!
Lovely puente form. And I just love the word shashay--had not thought of it in a long time. Great image with the ripe fruit.
Gillena you totally nailed this form! Love that third stanza, made me laugh out loud! Absolutely wonderful :-D
Thanks Sherry
Much love...
Thank you for your appreciation Peggy
Much love...
Glad you dropped in Sara
Much love...
Oh, kind of a sassy one--love it!
looks like that sugar is going to be too sweet..smiles..very nice Gillena:)
Happy you visited Madwoman
Much love...
Thanks Arathi
Much love..
Moving from a beautiful moment to a winking, knowing moment - each part of this poem is beautiful. I tip my hat to you! Loving this puente poem.
Thanks for your appreciation blogit
Much love...
A delightful Puente - with just a dash of sensuality.
Thanks Wendy, happy you stopped by
much love...
it reminds me of the sweet times
What a beautiful bridge you've written here, a great job!
Happy you dropped in Thomas
Much love...
Thanks Bastet
Much love...
Very nice use of the puente form! It was impossible not to smile when reading that last stanza. Lovely!
Glad i made you smile mrs-minerva
Much love...
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