image from google dot com
encased in surprise
a bud warmed by the sun rays...
if i were sunflower
children stories hold
such sunflowers crayon scrawled...
boldness of noon sun
were i sunflower
head bowed at the setting sun
reverent day ends
-gillena cox
Revisit
A Sunflower
CS21
If Picasso
Poetry Jam the prompt is "if i were"
32 comments:
I always like looking at sunflowers, and yes so often they look like they have their heads bowed reverently at the end of a day.
sun flowers....so radiant and beautiful...if i was one...ah....but with winter coming they will all bow low...soon...
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Thanks or your appreciation Brian
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Sunflowers are wonderful and inspiring bright spots and they do attract our attention, even when they stoop at the end of the day. Beautiful images!
Sunflowers always amaze me. How can a flower be so large? Small flowers and leaves also turn to the sun, but not as noticeably as a sunflower. And I know of no others that bow down to the ground when there is no sun. They are fascinating flowers.
I love sunflowers but have not often seen them growing. I don't know if I have noticed them bowing their heads. Neat.
I love sunflowers. I like your progression of haikus. The last one is my favorite, perhaps because I love sunsets and the reverece it evokes, even if we're not sunflowers.
I can see you as a sunflower:)
Lovely haiku !
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Glad you dropped in Peggy
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Thanks Myrna
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A sunflower - such an evocative and sunny image for me. Loved this.
what a beautiful sun loving flower...always yes to light and no to darkness...wonderfully woven Gillena :)
Phenomenal photo and the words are so precious, bravo Gillena
There is a certain beautiful glory in being a sun flower....love the thoughts in this. :-)
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Sunflowers are the best, i sure you are a sunflower.
who knows
where the time goes . . .
sunflower
thanks Alan
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thank you for sharing Bill
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Thats beautiful. I adore sunflowers...they are simple, but so vibrant! Have a wonderful Sunday.
Love your poetry Gillena. I'm a poet-y kind of girl. Love sunflowers too.
Happy you dropped in Frieda
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Thank you for your appreciation Judie
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A simple sunflower encapsulates all of our life's endeavours... Lovely, Gillena.
Thanks for your appreciation Nicholas
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