Tuesday, June 23, 2015

1688

image courtesy Carpe Diem


they tease the seascape
coconut palms fronds in the wind -
sound of lapping waves

seagull -
each dive from the rocks
feeds with precision

sundown -
a bus trudging through forests
such narrow paths

© gillena cox


i'm blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #49 at the seashore (Vision Quest reprise)

25 comments:

Unknown said...

such a lovely series, I feel I was there and I want to go back!! :)

Anonymous said...

This really take me away to a delightful place.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl-Lynn

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Anon

much love...

Anonymous said...

beautiful imagery, Gillena :)

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

enjoyed your post . thank you

Gillena Cox said...

thanks Polona

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped by Siggi

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Out of Sight L said...

always such a lovely pleasure to stop and absorb your words and lovely photo dear Gillena, so many have left...breaks my heart, stay well

Magyar said...

__Gillena, my echoed walk through your fine verses. I see as I see, through that that you have written. _m

long light
in this narrow pathway
palm fronds taunt

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing Magyar

much love...

Janice said...

What a lovely group of haiku. Nice scene you have painted.

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Janice

much love...

lynn__ said...

Interesting perspective in these haiku, Gillena. The first is my personal favorite!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lynn

much love...

Blogoratti said...

I thought that was lovely. Well done!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for stopping by Blogoratti

Much love...

Chèvrefeuille said...

You did great on this Tokubetsudesu episode Gillena, three little gems with great images hidden in it. Well done.

Sara McNulty said...

Lovely haiku that intertwine beautifully.

Unknown said...

Nicely written Gillena .. they creat a beautiful image. Bastet

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Kristjaan

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for dropping in Sara

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Georgia

much love...

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