they tease the seascape
coconut palms fronds in the wind -
sound of lapping waves
seagull -
each dive from the rocks
feeds with precision
sundown -
a bus trudging through forests
such narrow paths
© gillena cox
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #49 at the seashore (Vision Quest reprise)
25 comments:
such a lovely series, I feel I was there and I want to go back!! :)
This really take me away to a delightful place.
Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl-Lynn
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Thanks Anon
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beautiful imagery, Gillena :)
enjoyed your post . thank you
thanks Polona
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Happy you dropped by Siggi
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always such a lovely pleasure to stop and absorb your words and lovely photo dear Gillena, so many have left...breaks my heart, stay well
__Gillena, my echoed walk through your fine verses. I see as I see, through that that you have written. _m
long light
in this narrow pathway
palm fronds taunt
Happy you dropped in Lorraine
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Thanks for sharing Magyar
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What a lovely group of haiku. Nice scene you have painted.
happy you dropped in Janice
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Interesting perspective in these haiku, Gillena. The first is my personal favorite!
Thank you for your appreciation Lynn
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I thought that was lovely. Well done!
Thank you for stopping by Blogoratti
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You did great on this Tokubetsudesu episode Gillena, three little gems with great images hidden in it. Well done.
Lovely haiku that intertwine beautifully.
Nicely written Gillena .. they creat a beautiful image. Bastet
Thanks Kristjaan
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thanks for dropping in Sara
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Happy you dropped in Georgia
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