Wednesday, June 24, 2015

1689




a verdant drive through -
near a lagoon vendors ply
first view of the beach

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a verdant drive through
from the side of the mountain
water tricking down

near a lagoon vendors ply
their sugar cakes and fudge -
wide toothy smiles

first view of the beach
smell of the salty sea
draws me closer

© gillena cox 2015




I am blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem #762 lagoon

26 comments:

Dolores Fegan said...

Very nice set! Very vivid!

Gillena Cox said...

thanks for dropping in Dolores
much love...

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Are you sure it's not the sweets vendor drawing you closer? ;)

Anonymous said...

Wonderful story in haiku -- I enjoyed this :)

Cheryl-Lynn Roberts said...

a lovely journey in your set and the best for the last...love that salty air!

Gillena Cox said...

(◕‿◕。) more of a salt than a sweet tooth person Maggie

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

thank you Paloma

much love..

Gillena Cox said...

yeah that salty air, thanks for dropping in Cheryl-Lynn

much love...

Lorraine Renaud said...

You make me thirst for the knowledge you surely have to draw and speak beauty and love, thank you my dear Gillena

Bill said...

Nicely spun.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bill

Much love...

Adelaide said...

A lovely set. I like the last the best.

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped bin Adelaide

Much love...

blogoratti said...

That was a lovely and mesmerizing piece.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Blogoratti

Much love...

alp said...

Te mando un beso desde Murcia..que vaya todo el fin de semana muy bien...

Reading Pleasure said...

Lovely, Gillena.

Magyar said...

A nice trio of your verses, Gillena_! Instant's response, a memory of long ago. _m

in salted air
the near sounds of high-tide waves
Schoodic Point

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in alp

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Celestine

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing yours Magyar

Much love...

Georgia Koch said...

enchanting!

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Georgia

much love...

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