Wednesday, June 24, 2015

1689




a verdant drive through -
near a lagoon vendors ply
first view of the beach

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a verdant drive through
from the side of the mountain
water tricking down

near a lagoon vendors ply
their sugar cakes and fudge -
wide toothy smiles

first view of the beach
smell of the salty sea
draws me closer

© gillena cox 2015




I am blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem #762 lagoon

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26 Comments:

Blogger Dolores Fegan said...

Very nice set! Very vivid!

2:02 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thanks for dropping in Dolores
much love...

5:52 PM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Are you sure it's not the sweets vendor drawing you closer? ;)

10:24 PM  
OpenID blogitorloseit.com said...

Wonderful story in haiku -- I enjoyed this :)

11:12 PM  
Blogger Cheryl-Lynn Roberts said...

a lovely journey in your set and the best for the last...love that salty air!

12:14 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

(◕‿◕。) more of a salt than a sweet tooth person Maggie

much love...

7:39 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

thank you Paloma

much love..

7:40 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

yeah that salty air, thanks for dropping in Cheryl-Lynn

much love...

7:41 AM  
Blogger Lorraine Renaud said...

You make me thirst for the knowledge you surely have to draw and speak beauty and love, thank you my dear Gillena

8:58 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Nicely spun.

11:24 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Lorraine

Much love...

1:29 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bill

Much love...

1:30 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

A lovely set. I like the last the best.

Adelaide

10:14 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped bin Adelaide

Much love...

10:31 PM  
Blogger blogoratti said...

That was a lovely and mesmerizing piece.

2:41 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Blogoratti

Much love...

3:34 AM  
Blogger alp said...

Te mando un beso desde Murcia..que vaya todo el fin de semana muy bien...

8:26 AM  
Anonymous Reading Pleasure said...

Lovely, Gillena.

11:30 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

A nice trio of your verses, Gillena_! Instant's response, a memory of long ago. _m

in salted air
the near sounds of high-tide waves
Schoodic Point

8:30 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for dropping in alp

Much love...

12:10 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Celestine

Much love...

12:11 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for sharing yours Magyar

Much love...

12:11 AM  
Blogger Georgia Koch said...

enchanting!

2:13 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Georgia

much love...

7:50 AM  
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