a verdant drive through -
near a lagoon vendors ply
first view of the beach
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a verdant drive through
from the side of the mountain
water tricking down
near a lagoon vendors ply
their sugar cakes and fudge -
wide toothy smiles
first view of the beach
smell of the salty sea
draws me closer
© gillena cox 2015
Carpe Diem #762 lagoon
25 comments:
Very nice set! Very vivid!
thanks for dropping in Dolores
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Are you sure it's not the sweets vendor drawing you closer? ;)
Wonderful story in haiku -- I enjoyed this :)
a lovely journey in your set and the best for the last...love that salty air!
(◕‿◕｡) more of a salt than a sweet tooth person Maggie
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thank you Paloma
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yeah that salty air, thanks for dropping in Cheryl-Lynn
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You make me thirst for the knowledge you surely have to draw and speak beauty and love, thank you my dear Gillena
Nicely spun.
Thanks Bill
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A lovely set. I like the last the best.
Adelaide
Happy you dropped bin Adelaide
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That was a lovely and mesmerizing piece.
Thanks Blogoratti
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Te mando un beso desde Murcia..que vaya todo el fin de semana muy bien...
Lovely, Gillena.
A nice trio of your verses, Gillena_! Instant's response, a memory of long ago. _m
in salted air
the near sounds of high-tide waves
Schoodic Point
Thanks for dropping in alp
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Happy you dropped in Celestine
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Thanks for sharing yours Magyar
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enchanting!
happy you dropped in Georgia
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