Wednesday, August 07, 2013

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SALT AND GREEN GUAVAS

it all makes sense
my childhood landscape reviewed...
salt and green guavas

gravity dictates
head in clouds
feet in shoes

a quiet breath
sends a whispered prayer
shadow fades to light

daily bread...
plans already drawn
building the kingdom

threadbare clich├ęs only wear one out

--gillena cox


(i created the image of 'green guavas' after seeing some, while out on an errand, weeks ago; and filed it. Since i was sharing my NaHaiWriMo prompts here during the month of August; i haven't written a wordle response in a while; today, i decided to get back to the wordles, after looking at this week's, i started doodling with the words, and realized i could use the 'green guavas' image to haiga, to introduce, and to title; so hope you enjoy SALT AND GREEN GUAVAS )



Linked today to Sunday Whirl Wordle #120

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16 Comments:

Anonymous brenda w said...

The quietness of your piece is lovely and reflective.

8:49 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Brenda; glad you stopped by

much love...

10:32 AM  
Blogger Jules said...

I like this very much. It is amazing how much cliches seem to run a muck as well as run our lives.

Thank you for your visit to: C5 An All Around Education (wordle).
You stumbled upon an ongoing series that I have been doing for The Sunday Whirl. If you every had the time or the want...the whole of it can be found here:
http://julesstorypageswhirl.wordpress.com/all-together-now-so-far-anyway/

Each story verse is just about a page long, but now there are over 60.

One of these days I'm going to learn how to do haiga...but I lack the computer skills at the moment. :)

Thanks again, JulesPaige

2:45 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Over 60 wow, that quite a series; thank you for leaving the link, i will certainly visit to get to your entire series


much love...

3:50 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Gillena...great posts over the week. It's amazing how you get all the wordies. You have a very creative mind.

Adelaide

6:13 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Adelaide, happy you dropped in

much love...

7:16 PM  
Blogger Donetta Sifford said...

I love the reflection and imagery. I also love the line 'daily bread'. Like a calm prayer over food.

1:01 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Donetta


much love...

6:40 AM  
Blogger flaubert said...

Gillena, this is a lovely poem. So nice to see you again.

Pamela

5:10 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Flaubert, glad you stopped by

much love...

7:22 PM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

You constantly amaze me, it is a complete pleasure to all my senses

8:15 AM  
Anonymous Sharp Little Pencil said...

I love the guavas... and you take on gravity ("head in the clouds, feet on the ground") is lovely. Keep that sense of gravity going, Gillena, because we all need it! Very nicely Wordled, and thanks for commenting at my little blog! Amy

2:19 PM  
Blogger Frieda said...

That's a lovely poem... and the idea of using the image of green guavas is very nice.

2:45 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Lorraine

happy you dropped in


much love...

7:13 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Amy thank you for your appreciation

much love...

7:14 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Freida

happy you stopped by much love...

7:15 AM  

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