Saturday, August 24, 2013

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Its Renku Saturday #42, add your verse if you wish, i'll edit and pin it upfront also revisit Renku Saturday #41

old friends...
smiles of remembrances
surface
--gillena cox


stars' meeting
which one
speaks first

--Chiyo-ni (1701-1775)


late summer grasses . . .
how my old friend
has aged

-- Bill


wilderness twilight—
even tiny broken things
are murmuring truth

--Mystical Magical Teacher

Linked today to Six Word Saturday AND Recuerda Mi Corazon - Haiku My Heart

20 comments:

Jim said...

Hi Gillena ~~ Nice Six this morning.

I am glad you are leaving a nice Mr. Linky because I can't RETURN a comment. I am directed to Google Plus every time and I don't see a blog link there.
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Gillena Cox said...

Jim thank you for stopping by; been getting some problems to comment at some of the links myself


much love...

soulbrush said...

How lovely.

Gillena Cox said...

happy you stopped by soulbrush


much love...

Lorraine said...

what a wonderful interpretation you gave it, it's beautiful

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for your appreciation Lorraine


much love...

Mlissabeth said...

This is a beautiful set of words well expressed.

Lea said...

Lovely, both, but the second one really speaks to me... Yes, my bad pun is intended... :-)

Becca said...

Enjoy your Saturday :)

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you beth; happy you dropped in


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Lea glad you enjoyed,


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Becca


much love...

Anonymous said...

It's frustrating when you can't leave a comment isn't it? Many thanks for visiting mine. I looked at a few of your haikus and they're great. :)

Bill said...

late summer grasses . . .
how my old friend
has aged

Gillena Cox said...

Jo thank you for dropping in

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Bill, glad you stopped by than you for sharing, i'll edit and pin your post upfront



much love...

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Interactive haiku! Neat!

Haiku My Heart Broken Things

Gillena Cox said...

thank you for stopping by and leaving your link; i'll visit, edit and pin yours upront

much love...

Laura said...

beautiful... and all flow so well together!

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Laura, glad you stopped by


much love...