Saturday, January 21, 2012

Renku Saturday 14


image from google


does my star too
sleep alone?
Milky Way
--Issa, 1822



one black bird singing
to the light of morning -
i too am alone-

--gillena cox 2012


revisit Renku Saturday 13

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4 Comments:

Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the side by side comparison of the two haiku here

4:38 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Juilet; glad you stopped by


much love...

8:58 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Yes, a very nice pairing, and the jux in yours is most effective.

3:13 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Bill

much love...

5:20 PM  

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