Saturday, January 21, 2012

Renku Saturday 14

image from google

does my star too
sleep alone?
Milky Way
--Issa, 1822

one black bird singing
to the light of morning -
i too am alone-

--gillena cox 2012

revisit Renku Saturday 13


Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the side by side comparison of the two haiku here

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Juilet; glad you stopped by

much love...

Bill said...

Yes, a very nice pairing, and the jux in yours is most effective.

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Bill

much love...