Renku Saturday 14
image from google
does my star too
sleep alone?
Milky Way
--Issa, 1822
one black bird singing
to the light of morning -
i too am alone-
--gillena cox 2012
revisit Renku Saturday 13
Labels: alone, Caribbean, Japan, renku, Trinidad and Tobago
posted by Gillena Cox at 1:51 PM
4 Comments:
I like the side by side comparison of the two haiku here
Thank you Juilet; glad you stopped by
much love...
Yes, a very nice pairing, and the jux in yours is most effective.
Thank you Bill
much love...
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