Lunch Break: Renku Saturday 14

Saturday, January 21, 2012

Renku Saturday 14

image from google

does my star too
sleep alone?
Milky Way
--Issa, 1822

one black bird singing
to the light of morning -
i too am alone-
--gillena cox 2012

revisit Renku Saturday 13

4 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...: I like the side by side comparison of the two haiku here; 4:38 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you Juilet; glad you stopped by

much love...; 8:58 PM
Bill said...: Yes, a very nice pairing, and the jux in yours is most effective.; 3:13 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you Bill

much love...; 5:20 PM