Lunch Break: 1527

Wednesday, November 05, 2014

1527

coconut trees sway...
a pocketful of pebbles
to stir the waters
his wag tail dog frisks along
the shoreline shifting in waves
-- gillena cox

Revisit
lapping
toss
yield

i am blog hopping today at
Poetry Jam the prompt is "pebble"

30 comments:

Mary said...: Nice - can picture the shoreline shifting in waves.....; 11:59 AM
Anonymous said...: Beautiful scene to think of! Keep it up!; 1:58 PM
Peggy said...: What a peaceful feeling scene. I like that wag-tailed dog!; 2:32 PM
Brian Miller said...: great to have that friend along while you are skipping rocks...or just plunking them in the water to make ripples....; 2:40 PM
alan1704 said...: I can taste the sea breeze in this, beautifully conveyed.; 2:57 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Mary, happy you dropped in

Much love...; 4:00 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in Umanga

Much love...; 4:05 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Peggy

Much love...; 4:06 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Indeed Brian, happy you stopped by

Much love...; 4:07 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Alan

Much love...; 4:07 PM
Pealogic said...: "his wag tail dog frisks along"

I just loved this line.; 4:24 PM
Sarav said...: Love the flow of this poem and a pocket full of pebbles to stir the waters... Wonderful! :-); 8:50 PM
Sumana Roy said...: such lively scene..could feel the dancing of life here...; 6:02 AM
Out of Sight L said...: How beautiful this is, I love what you write and the designs you show, beautiful, Gillena; 9:47 AM
rallentanda said...: Nice tranquil beach scene.; 11:43 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you Pealogic

Much love...; 12:28 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Sara

Much love...; 12:29 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Lorraine

Much love...; 12:30 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Rallentanda

Much love...; 12:31 PM
Bill said...: moonlight on the water
the weight of a pebble

by the ocean
the weight of a pebble
on the moon; 7:20 PM
Gillena Cox said...: nice! thanks for sharing Bill

much love...; 8:04 AM
artbyrae said...: very nice; 12:03 AM
Cifar said...: reading and praising , beautiful lines

Pebbles; 4:13 AM
Gabriella said...: I enjoyed the beach walk you took us on.; 2:42 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped by Rae

Much love...; 3:58 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you Cifar

Much love...; 4:25 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

Much love...; 4:26 PM
Donna Smith said...: Nothing happier than a "wag tail dog" at the beach! Thanks for the images today.; 9:35 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Donna

much love...; 4:37 PM
Intelliblog said...: A happy serene moment! Lovely, Gillena.; 7:22 PM