Sunday, October 11, 2015

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Sunday morning rain...
a sprinkling of kindness
on wildflowers

wildflowers in relief...
dipped in holy water founts
fingers of faithfuls

fingers of faithfuls...
prayers of peace circle aves
on rosary beads

rosary beads
in October days weigh...
tradition of hope

© gillena cox 2015


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39 comments:

Jae Rose said...

I love how each verse leads to the next..like the turning of a rosary bead..

Blogoratti said...

An early morning rain is always great, ushers in the new day and new dreams. A delightful piece, and greetings to you lovely.

Sumana Roy said...

a beautiful cascade, prayerful and ending in hope....

Mary said...

There is such a feeling of relief in the drops of October rain.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Jae

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Blogoratti

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Sumana

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Gillena Cox said...

Surely Mary, happy you dropped in

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Diane Mayr said...

The ladybugs lend a note of happiness in the haiga. Nice.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Diane

much love...

Sanaa Rizvi said...

You certainly paint a beautiful morning :D

dsnake1 said...

delightful verses. loved how each stanza is linked. :)

brudberg said...

I like the images of rain and rosary beads.. very much sunday in this.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Sana'a

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Cheong San

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Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Bjorn

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Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...

Oh the beauty of your words in those first few lines rained down on me today with such a peace!

Gillena Cox said...

Glad you dropped in Donna

Much love...

Sherry Blue Sky said...

These are all very lovely. I especially like the sprinkling of kindness on wildflowers.

Natašek said...

such mornings can be really relaxing.

Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped in Loredana

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Sherry

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

happy you dropped in Nataša

much love...

Old Egg said...

What a beautiful reminder in your poem of how interconnected everything is in life whether in the natural world or the man made one. We do exist alone.

Old Egg said...

Oops It meant "We do not exist alone".

Susan said...

Faithful fingers keep the traditions of hope growing along with the wildflowers. Nicely turned out for a happy Sunday.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Robin

Much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks for your appreciation Susan

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped on Robin

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Gillena Cox said...

Happy you dropped on Robin

Much love...

humbird said...

Nice light chain poem, I love this kind, the rain - 'a sprinkling of kindness ~ and the world become the better place ~ Love

Truedessa said...

I like how the opening made me feel..it makes the rain a blessing and I do enjoy the beauty of wildflowers.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely joyous Sunday words.
Anna :o]

Unknown said...

I like how the verses flow into each other, like rosary beads being pulled through the fingers...lovely and hopeful

Anonymous said...

Nice chained haiku...

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

A very nice chain! I love best of all the first one, that you made into a haiga, but I also appreciate the progression from each one to the next.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Rosemary

Much love...

Gen Giggles said...

I like the circular feel of this poem.

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks GL

much love...