a flicker of hope
all we need to steer our course -
hatred a dark void
a dark void hatred
insatiable hunger feeds -
birds twitter again
twitter again birds -
the morning comes in measured
notes song unending
© gillena cox 2015
Sunday Lime 1
For Catholics today is the first Sunday of the Season of Advent
Sundays are always special here at Lunch Break. Today is #61 in the series Sunday Lime How is your Sunday going email me post a COMMENT or leave a link to your blog at the linky below
Poetry Pantry 280
Thanks for dropping in Thotpurge
Yes, we must keep our eyes on that flicker of hope!
No doubt a flicker of hope can help steer our path away from a dark & undesired void.
Have a lovely weekend Gillena :D
Lots of love,
Happy you dropped in Mary
Thanks for linking up Sanaa
Very effective word play and a song that really lingers :)
Happy you dropped in Jae
Hatred is indeed the dark void....
Thanks for dropping in Sumana
True soulful poem!
Have a blessed new week
Oh please give me shelter from that dark wind.
Hatred is a dark ditch that thankfully most of us do not want to fall in....well said, Gillena.
Surely Bjorn a worthy plea
thanks for dropping by
Happy you dropped in Sherry
Beautiful...and it is that hope I cling to!
I do like how this wraps around itself. And hatred is indeed a dark void, a ditch. Happy Advent to you. A good reminder of Light and Love.
Happy you dropped in Donna
Hope is all we need in this present day and time. A great piece indeed!
A candle or flicker of hope is needed in the world
Hope and stillness--beautiful--this just shines
Looking forward to this season of promise has lasted over two thousand years, what a blessed consistency.
Thanks for dropping in Blogoratti
Indeed Trudessa indeed
Thank you for your appreciation Audrey
"a blessed consistency."
i like that phrase
Thanks for dropping in Robin
I think I like the last verse the best. Nice to meet your work.
hatred...unwillingness to look at world through someone else's eyes....hope we are able to stretch and reach the hand of our closest neighbor....
Thank you pviljoen
Thanks for your appreciation humbird
Happy you dropped on Rajesh
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