hospital visit -
the direction of arrows
on squeaky clean floors
© gillena cox 2016
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mother-in-law
Went to visit my mother in law at hospital yesterday. She had knee surgery, is resting comfortably, and in good spirits.
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Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart - arrows
32 comments:
So well worded in its simplicity.
Happy you dropped in Mary
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Inspiration to write comes from everywhere!!
Ah, nobody likes a hospital visit, but at least your haiku captures the essence of such a visit.
Lovely write, Gillena. Hope your mother-in-law is better now ❤️
I can hear the footsteps on the squeaky clean floors.
Hospitals can be eerily quiet and squeaking shoes on linoleum floors can sound as loud as fireworks!
depending on who I visit, those squeaky floors could be an ominous sign.
Ah yes. That's the simplicity of haiku. Thanks for dropping in Thotpurge
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Thanks for your appreciation MMT
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She is recuperating nicely Sanaa
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😊 thanks for dropping by Sherry
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Thanks for dropping by and linking in Diane
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Yeah I know. But she is recuperating nicely thank you Björn
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My mom has been in and out of the hospital, so I know about those arrows that help navigate you though the clean floors. I am glad she doing well and resting.
Thanks for dropping in Truedessa
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My husband's been ill. Spent about 2 months in hospital. Until I read your poem, I hadn't focused on the gratitude I feel for them.
Glad your mother-in-law is doing well.
Nice haiku ...prayers
ZQ
A wonderfully constructed haiku. And best wishes to your Mom.
An observant haiku. Hope your mother-in-law is doing well.
Adelaide
I love the smell of the hospital but I always find the squeky clean floors creepy haha :)
It paints a picture.
Thanks for your appreciation Myrna
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Thanks ZQ
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Thanks Wendy
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Thanks Adelaide
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😊 happy you dropped by Totomai
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Thanks for your appreciation J Cosmo
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Glad things are going well.
If you want a little more action, you might try "following the arrows" for line 2, but action isn't everything.
thanks for dropping in Bill
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somehow--this just speaks to me! Happy Halloween!!!
Thanks for dropping by Audrey
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